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Midnight's Dark Moon
by Susan K. de Vegter
Wednesday, June 18, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Midnight's dark moon aflow on the waves
Innocence calling- "try to behave"
Silhouettes bond on beaches’ white sands
Walking embraced... hands gripping hands
Thoughts all together, a sameness festooned
Hearts raw and beating under this moon
Louder the silence of midnight forsakes
Two lover's passion... pushing their brakes
Each step of innocence comes a new dare
Caressing this mystery and pleasuring cares
Reaching for something , risking their ruin
Touching the rhythm of their own wrong-doing
Collapsing on sand dunes...legs weaving slow
Bathed in the moonlight's phosphorous glow
Body's heaving with each rushing wave
It's too late now as nothing behaves
Moisture is beading as energies fly
Arching to arches...moans meeting sighs
Thunderous lightening with no storm in sight
A dance with the devil in the pale moonlight.

Copyright ©2002 Susan Kathryn de Vegter

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Reviewed by Dark Knight 8/6/2009
wow-quite the poem!!
Reviewed by Art Sun 7/10/2008
Nice work Susan...the Moon can move the sensualistic waves when midnight and lovers stroll the sands...

very nice...

Art Sun...
Reviewed by JAG Garcia 7/10/2008
The crescendo in these verses made my veins palpitate! Engaging and seductively beautiful! Lovers in a forbidden rendezvous!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/26/2008
Sensually engaging, Susan. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by Ed J. 6/24/2008
Whew! A very visually vivid rendition! let me catch my breath. Wondeful write! I was raised on the caost and will always be partial to the beach, perhaps I relate to this more based on that.

stay southern and keep smiling.

Reviewed by William Bonilla 6/22/2008
As always you shared a beautiful write
Loaded with imgery
Most enjoyable to read
Love & peace

Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/19/2008
Wow! The passion explodes from this one in a sensual delight that captures the mind and turns reader into voyeur as your images come to life. Excellant write dear Susan...excellant.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 6/19/2008
I love everything about this poem!!!!!
Did you see the moon last night? It was incredibly huge and brilliant.
It's called the Strawberry Moon, and the closest moon to the summer solstice...Tomorrow rings in the summer!!!
Glad to see you back, hope all is well with you and you are on the healthy path once more.
Peace, love, and light, my dear friend,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 6/19/2008

I have enjoyed the reading of "Midnight's Dark Moon".

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 6/19/2008
I love it when you are devilish!

Reviewed by Axilea MU 6/19/2008
A passionate piece of writing, like a memory that lingers.

Reviewed by Aubrey Hammack 6/19/2008
I love the moon. I love the line it's too late now as nothing behaves as well as thunderous lighting with no storm in sight. It reminds me of Shhh don't say a word.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 6/19/2008
Such beautiful sensuality. So glad I read this, a storm of fierce romance.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 6/19/2008
A dance with the devil indeed. Well written Sue.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 6/19/2008
Let's hear it for the devil here and now . . . Nobody . . . NOBODY can capture the beat of two hearts quite like my friend Susan . . . She is a wealth of emotions and she shares some of them with us to out great and pleasurable delight . . .
Reviewed by Paul Berube 6/19/2008

Very romantic and love the imagery. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 6/18/2008
Fantastic images Susan...I went to Tybee on this one.

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega 6/18/2008
So vivid, so sensual, and so alive are your words in this, I can envision the scene, I especially like the last two lines, so true,
"A dance with the devil in the pale moonlight"

Love, Pierre
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/18/2008
I adore your imagery, your words, your passion - a beautiful package, Susan!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 6/18/2008
Full moon is now, and I just love to look up in the sky to view it. It is so nice to see that old moon and know it will be therefor me tomorrow and ever onward.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 6/18/2008
The Jersey Devil does as well dance in the moonlight and he would enjoy a dance with you...ed
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