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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
6/28/2008 |
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| Yes Dear Rose, life is full of seasons and stages. Those precious memories should bring joy and when change comes embraced for with new hobbies and new starts. I myself helped my son pack and move a couple of weeks ago and it was not easy. Well Done! Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
6/27/2008 |
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Rose, this just rips into my heart
the loneliness of it all
life is just so wonderful & also so empty in ways
Beautiful Emotions Though Because The Love Reaches Through Your Pen To Us Readers Even Past The Sorrow Of it All.
Much Love & Inspiration To You!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/23/2008 |
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Sad but very well written poem, Rose; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
6/21/2008 |
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| Your poem is part of the reality of life. You have written it so well! Things do change as time goes along and we have no control over it. Growing old is hard . Some are lucky to have loved ones that care ,some have no one. I don't think many realize what its like till they live it themselves....GREAT WRITE....M |
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| Reviewed by Myrtle Poor (Reader) |
6/21/2008 |
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Rose, my dear friend this is so sad, but I can connect with you. I've been there and done that and is very lonely. Thanks for sharing.
Love and blessings,
Myrtle |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
6/20/2008 |
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| This touches my heart and makes me think of my grown sons |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
6/20/2008 |
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Rose this is so sad
Your last stanza its so beautiful!
And so true!
Beautifully writing and expressed memories of old
Forgotten parents!!
Peace Love and Light..and hugesss too....Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/20/2008 |
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| BEAUTIFUL,SAD, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! 'I cry another lost lonely tear'--------Most beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
6/20/2008 |
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| Sad, but such words of truth! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
6/19/2008 |
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| So true, Rose, so true. But you are not crying alone. Excellent. Liz |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/19/2008 |
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| This is so true of many Rose, and your compassion covers it the way it is. We can only pray and hope their families will realize their worth! ET |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
6/19/2008 |
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Awwww, dont worry Rose, They'll be back...LOL
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/19/2008 |
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Sad but all too real write, all too often Fathers in past could not always be with their children due to work and as a result missed so many important landmarks then sadly all too often they were the first to go and their children had so few memories of them as compared to their mothers. Also sadly in today's world of both parents having to work to keep up they are both losing a lot of precious memories as well.
hugs
your cuz
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/19/2008 |
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awwww,, This tugs at my heart,, Beautiful words from your loving heart.
Love, Christine
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/19/2008 |
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| wow Sad write Rose. Stay strong my friend. My prayers are always with you. God bless. |
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| Reviewed by Fred Rideout (Reader) |
6/19/2008 |
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| How soon they forget, that what we feel now is the same as they'll feel in the future. The best we can do is hold on to memories and each other. I Love You. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/19/2008 |
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| What you say is so true and it will be them one day. |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/19/2008 |
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| I see my family all together mostly at holidays. Sometimes they come to family picnics or birthday celebrations, etc. It is so nice when I see all 4 girls and their families all together. It makes me feel so good. Meanwhile I pray for them each day and say God, they each must go their own ways, keep them safe and happy. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/19/2008 |
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If only they would realize that this will be them one day.
I hope many realize this, after reading your heartfelt piece, Rose. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
6/19/2008 |
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| So sad and well penned Rose. I never forgot my parents, I cared about and for them to the end. Not so with my children, I can relate to this poem. |
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