|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|Creepy... well written!
|Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
|A surprise from what I'm used to! But very entertaining and so true on the mark. Those in the spotlight do indeed lose freedom and possibly more. Well Done! Deborah|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Goodness....I bet she may regret the trust she felt she had, or privacy she never really had.....Great Poetic Piece Bernice!
Embraced ~ Embrassť
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|We are only afraid until the day we understand that fear comes from within.
Well composed piece!
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|A captivating chilling write!. Beware beautiful lady.....M|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Very well written and this poem kept me engaged and wanting more.
Much peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Outstanding poetry as usual
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Shivers and quivers as I read each line, almost as though you are taking us to the unknown, a fantastic write that you share with us. Thank you Bernice.
Newfie hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|So very unique and compelling!|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
We don't know when but we know it's coming. Until then, Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Bernice, this is fantastic...one of your best. What a price to pay!|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|there is a flip side to everything Bernice, fame, beauty, even showing love, you expressed this very well poetically. There's a difference in eyes and hands though, eyes only watch, hands can touch. Of course eyes can lead to hands. There's also a difference in fear and paranoia, too much fear can freeze, too much paranoia can mess up the mind, just enough is all a person needs, can't blame you much for traveling this direction though, minus me from your formula I'm about 800 miles from you my dear. I don't fly and gas cost too much to be jiving around tehhehehe,just kidding, :-)|
|Reviewed by Charlie
|Fame!... it hardly ever creates in you a better or a safer person, does it? Brings to mind also, the song "Every Breath You TAke... every smile you fake, every breath you take, I'll be watching you..." --Charlie|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|I love the tension in this and the 'Marilyn Monroe/Paris Hilton' moments, but there's a frightening side, too, and the final lines, brilliantly evocative, send a chill.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|I looked behind me. Glad I found the wall as I thought I would. The watcher sent chills up my spine as I read this horror poem of suspense, tension and fear. Excellent. Liz|
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|This is a thriller. Bernice, you are so talented. You described this scene so well, that it is so easy to imagine this bombshell who was being stalked. Your writing skills never cease to amaze me. Very good writing. Two thumbs up !!!
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Oh my goodness - this gave me chills right up my spine! How well you pull the reader in - almost in envy - of this beautiful one only to wind up being so thankful that we are not her! Masterfully creepy write ~ well done, Bernice.|
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|Bernice, I believe some of these people want fame until they get it and then it drives them crazy. You've described it well!|
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|wow! amazin write Bernice
Sad how so many people search so hard to be recognized and honored, yet don't really understand what they are getting themselves into.
And I suspect that many of them do so because they don't have the love at home.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Being famous has its price to pay if we don't control it.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|That's why I don't want to be famous. LOL Well done, Bernice!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Bernice, you are indeed a poet. And this poem, so skillfully
crafted, depicts (it seems to me) the high cost of celebrity.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|The sad truth of the stardom is that after you struggle to reach the top and have people adore you, more often than not it is not what you really wanted but by then your life is public domain. Great capture of this subject Bernice.
|Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
|Hi Bernice--waht if there's nothing to save? Just move to a different stage. :)|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|YIKES! What a vision you were given here. Sounds like some of the stories emerging of late. For some reason brought to mind the story of Shania Twains predicament. Good colors and shadings in this Bernice, good imagery.