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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
12/22/2009 |
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deep wounds scar
lasting longer than the physical cruelty to love
it stirs deep
sending balms tenderness
Love & Blessings
Vickie
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/29/2009 |
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HOW STRONG...HOW CLEAR...HOW SAD. WRITTEN WELL AND SO ENJOYED. YOUR 'GIFT' HAS BLESSED ME AGAIN. THANKS FOR SHARING.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
12/14/2008 |
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Christine~!
Beautiful image; and your poem is simply extraordinary!!
LOve & Hugs,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
8/16/2008 |
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| This is a wistful and deeply emotional write. It says a great deal in just a few words. |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
8/7/2008 |
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This is deep!
Love heals all wounds!
wonderfully written and felt Christine!
As an angel watches and soothes above, from those clouds!
Stay Positive!
Warmest Blessings, LOVE,LIGHT, and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo
WRITE ON! I Love this picture! In flight - deep thought... |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
7/5/2008 |
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...slapped...finds the touching reality of your words...expressively sad...in words so beautifully written.
very well done Christine...
John
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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
6/28/2008 |
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| Reminded me of all the children who only just want love even from abusive parents. They still come close and hope everytime that slap will be replaced with a hug. Well Done! Deborah |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
6/23/2008 |
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| Well done Christine, love Holly |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
6/22/2008 |
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| Such sorrow. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Myrtle Poor (Reader) |
6/22/2008 |
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WOW! Short and sad, but says much. Good job Christine.
Stay Blessed.
Love,
Myrtle |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
6/21/2008 |
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| Much is said in a few words in this sad poem..Well done Christene!.......M |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
6/21/2008 |
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Wise expression in "Broken Wing" prods imagination and inspires the learning heart.
In damiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/20/2008 |
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A sad write
Well Penned
Love & peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/20/2008 |
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Oh how simply heartbreaking, yet gracefully said....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/20/2008 |
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Oh my, Christine, this is so poignantly sad but beautiful. I love the way you leave the reader with so much to think about! Very well done!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/20/2008 |
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a slap reality with written with beauty!
ET |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/20/2008 |
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| Lot said in those short words. A painful write. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/20/2008 |
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| Quite sad, Christine, as are all broken wings. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
6/20/2008 |
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| Beautifully written sadness, Christine. |
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| Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins |
6/20/2008 |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/20/2008 |
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Christine,
Hope this isn't your reality - sad one to read this morning!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
6/20/2008 |
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A sad write you share with us Christine as we face the truth about life, it can be happy/sad/good or bad but we learn to cope with it in our own way. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/20/2008 |
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| Sweet and Sour / Hot and Cold / This 'n That / Zinger of a sad tribute to life and its cold hard facts . . . |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/20/2008 |
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Oh Christine, this one is absolutely lovely,I could feel the sadness of the analogy and reread it several times absorbing the bittersweet sadness of the words. Perfect...
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Fee |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/20/2008 |
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| Tears. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
6/20/2008 |
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| Deeply affecting Christine, can feel the slap emotionally. |
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