After The Dance 1
by E T Waldron
Tuesday, June 24, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Only 2 more Chopin,I've had to keep my legs elevated so please,bear with me,I'll comment soon;-)
I have to stop pacing
she shouldn't see me like
this,but she drives me
crazy,enough to jump off
All my mind contains are
images of her long black
silken hair,my fingers love to
comb its lush lovliness
her porcelein face with large
seductive black dreamy eyes
and soft full lips that invite you
into her many pleasures
and I dare not think of her body
beyond looking at it,the privilege
to caress it,and enter in, there is
nothing can match such joy
why doesn't she come
I won't go back to town
how did I get this way
I was always the one
women couldn't resist
Perhaps there truly is Karma,
yet,with her I've been fair and
more so, she has my every thought
and all the love I have to give
So I wait~~~~~
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|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Not only she can talk, she can think too!
A lovely melody of words combined with the piano from Mallorca's Valdemosa where Chopin was taken care by George Sand ( a lovely girl they said she was)
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Take the time you need for you Eileen as we will always be here with open arms. Thank you for sharing another great write.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|ET, you'll make a Chopin lover out of me yet. Great poem.
Get well...soon! -gene.
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|There is emotion spread upon this page from edge to edge. Lament the accent that has adorned the face of it. For your return to well self, I wish expedience. A marvelous poem. God bless. JMW|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Ripped to the bare bone of payback time is this sad lament . . . The worm turns and although he likes the scenery, his treatment is far from ideal . . . Ya did good, Eileen . . .|
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Truly from the heart, wonderful art, sweet thoughts, Hugs!
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Eileen, with writing like this you could do it upside down hanging from the ceiling and it would still be marvelous, simply marvelous. Get healthy, soon.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Superb, Eileen; hope you are back in fine fettle soon! You are ever in my prayers, (((Sweetie)))!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Oh, Eileen, how beautiful this is!
Feel better, soon.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|This is such a beauty of a write ET, Hope you get better soon, and come back to the warm den of your friends.
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Take time for you. We'll be here, when you get back - until then, I can enjoy the loveliness of these lines - sublime poetry - well done!
(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla.