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A Temporary Loss Of Smell
by Southern Comfort
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There was a SKUNK in my woodpile


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When I first saw you I was lost in a Love Maze,
But what I thought was Brad Pitt, turned out to be Gabby Hays.
Blinded by self imposed fantasy,
I convinced myself, you were the one for me!
I was dreamy-eyed and love drunk,
I had just cozied up to a Low-down SKUNK!
I can't understand the attraction, do tell,
I guess I had just lost my sense of smell!
I think of myself as life smart,
But not too bright when it comes to affairs of the heart.
You are a Shallow Hal and a taker,
You are a selfish whiner, a bellyacher!
For the time I wasted on you, I am still kickin my ass,
You are a liar and your lovin was second class.
My sense of smell is now in the pink,
Cause I now can smell you and you really STINK!

Music: Dammit

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Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Those that insist to sleep with a skunk lover can't blame the emotional deodorant for no working...

Georg
Reviewed by Twisted Words
Well you certainly have an interesting way of seeing this situation. Sometimes our senses get a little skewed and have to re-balance.
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
Love the stark nakeness of this cute poem SC!
Hope getting it out HELPS!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Love, Warrior Purple Gypsy Lady Sheeoxooo
P.S. I know I have to earn your trust all over again and I will, it's been so long and their is no rhyme and reason - Just writing and less reading!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Oh my, someone really smelled up the world! Great vent SC.
Reviewed by Paul Berube
S.C.,

I love the music and the metaphors my friend. This hits home in a big way. Not because of a similar situation but because I actually have no sense of smell. Now this really STINKS.(lol) I could step on a skunk and never know it. Sorry if you had to go through what your poem says. No one deserves that kind of treatment. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Oh boy you surely have such a way with words! Bless your sweet heart.....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
LOL
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