|Reviewed by David Delaney
|Bernice, the visuals were just wonderful, well done.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|What beautiful imagery
You manage to place me there
within your magical dreams and fantasies
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Believe it or not, one of my neighbors is a Masai Princesse that weeded an engineer working for Norad helping African countries.
She tells the most amazing stories coming down from eons back from generation to generation.
After been there my self in all of Africa's shores and beyond, I can relate with fondness to "little one, little one, awake with me with the morning sun"
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|It sounds like a simple yet satisfying life. I love how you injected bits of culture, lending to the authenticity of the imagery. Great write!
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|I could picture this myself as I read the words you share with us Bernice. Thank you for a great write.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|thanks for painting a better picture of the mother country Bernice, I get tired of seeing the starving little fly faced children, entertaining and refreshing verse, big hug|
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|Bernice, this is truly visually beautiful, and I was singing along with it. Your voice brings to life a village in a far off country and allowed this reader to fill in much with imaginations. I loved the laid back, stress free surroundings I felt while reading this. This is a true keeper.|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Bernice, you take us to the village and through death, everything comes to life.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Very nice Bernice, sounds so simple and lovely...back to basics with no stress of a rushed life. Nice...
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|There is simplicity to the order of such days...
I miss visiting Haiti and feeling the unhurried attitude of the people. In some ways it is definitely a harder life, but... on the other hand...they understand the true necessities of life and they enjoy the simple things in life that I often don't take the time to even notice because I am so busy with unimportant things.
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|Lovely and thank you for sharing.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE, I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Lovely writing, it doesn't sound like a very simple day, though.
The pressure and incoherence of the outside world don't seem
to exist. Maybe that's what makes it sound simple: all the things
one does have a reason and a direct influence on everyday life.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Bernice, such beautiful imagery in this...you put us there!|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Beautiful Morning To You Bernice,
this lady kept me busy in visions of her day
a lovely story told in your poetic beautific way
Much Love & Inspiration
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|This is a very nice poem with great visuals and images of an african morning.Keep up the good work
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|Very beautiful !!
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|A day in the life, beautifully conveyed - well done, Bernice.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|A beautiful story unfolds in these delightful lyrics.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Beautiful write, Bernice, and I love that pic! Very nice; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|How appropriate this write is for me to read and review tonight Bernice. I just returned tonight from the Annual Reunion of the Canadian Black Battalion (2nd Construction) who were a group of African Canadians who literally fought to get into WWII to die for their country. Besides the usual round of speeches they had about thirty Black Canadian kids called the TC3 who are a dance and singing troop with drums out of Toronto...this write reminded me of them.
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...wonderful images of lifestyle and tradition...finds the color of your words...to awaken one...travel through the journey of a day...and then to return.
well written song of the heart Bernice...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I agree with Jerry. This is a delight to read, Bernice. It reminds me of my childhood on the northern Canadian prairies; life was not easy but I remember missing it very much when we moved. Thank you for sharing this lovely poetic song. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Aww . . . This is just delightful . . . You put pictures for the reader to see with your captivating words . . . You're a story teller yourself . . .|