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| Reviewed by JAG Garcia |
7/16/2008 |
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Rouge,
This one is fuuuuuuuuuuuuny! I love the way you put it together! What is good for the goose....
Thanks for the bringing a smile to my heart! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
7/13/2008 |
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| lol. She truly has command of the situation. Liz |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
7/10/2008 |
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| entertaining and creative Belle, love that music |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/9/2008 |
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LOL Love the way this couple interacts and plays the game of you do me and I'll do you. Good one Belle.
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Fee |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
7/9/2008 |
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| VERY NICE, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
7/8/2008 |
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| Thanks for the laughs. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/8/2008 |
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| After dealing with that guy Pee Wee off and on, the Colonel deserves a bit of a margarita & some tail...e |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/8/2008 |
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More wicknedness from you, wickedness that makes me laugh but makes me think, too. This is simply great!
John |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
7/8/2008 |
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| Well ifen that don't beat all, Sexy Daddy jest got back and my Sissy is on the prowl! Little Rattlesnake is hissin pissed! YA'LL best watch out fur SNAKE BITE! The Redhead's Sissy |
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| Reviewed by Nicky Goodman |
7/8/2008 |
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| Dear Belle - nice little studio, 2 cheeky doves, few poetry books, nicely stocked cupboards, sea view, technically Spain because they nicked it from the nice folk who were here already, and if you fancy, its all yours for the next couple of weeks as i would prefer to leave early - it's exhausting! i've just been accidentally snogged by an Italian, its hard to make it down the street, honestly, i'm wondering if there is may be a shortage of women folk here or something? i'm just glad to have made it home to a nice cup of tea and a spot of poetry - fun poem Belle, thanks for the read -enjoy the bubbles :) |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
7/8/2008 |
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lol...when the cats away a mouse can play ;)
lets Tango Baby...those latin men can not wait a whole year!!
I will be more than happy to join you on this erotic escape, a vacation indeed :) ahhh yes I love Margarita's Too!! :)
I can see the men now....
Much Love & Inspiration
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/8/2008 |
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Just love the humor in this, you tell him there will be no next time, right? Enjoy the bubble bath and margarita, you certainly have earned it....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
7/8/2008 |
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| lol,,,he has alot of making up to do I say,, Tis nice to have him back! |
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| Reviewed by Shedding Light |
7/8/2008 |
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Very difeerent, unique, and original. I love the rhyming fashion
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Harold M. Nash |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
7/8/2008 |
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You tell him La Belle, make him realize what he has at home so he knows he doesn't have to roam.. thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
7/8/2008 |
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| Right on, Belle. Spain is nice. You'll like it. Fun poem. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/8/2008 |
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RUH Roh, me thinks someone's in trouble ... LOL I ain't never been to Spain, either, La Belle, Mexico is as close as I've gotten (ole!). Georg didn't get me a souvenir, either ... RUH Roh! An excellent write, my dear Lady.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
7/8/2008 |
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The Colonel, as the Officer and a Gentleman he is will refrain to tell his Southern Belle to go smell some magnolias, after all it was she that didn't wanted to travel over that much water just for a short visit to a very little island...
the Colonel |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
7/8/2008 |
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| That old colonel is truly a rascal; he didn't even get his brother Pee Wee a souvenir! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/8/2008 |
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Delightful write, Belle; brava! Love the part about the cheeta; too funny! LOL
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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