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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
7/26/2008 |
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Well done, Fee. I think. Never cared much for those
hot damn, thank you ma'am, trysts. But its better than
a martini lunch. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
7/21/2008 |
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| OH those darn kids. You just can't get anything done. Trying to sneak a little and they are full of it. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Debra Baker |
7/18/2008 |
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Fee
I love this one. You captured the moment so well. A terrible thing when a couple can't seem to find that right moment to be together, alone...You know what I mean. Then, when it arrives, well the door bell rings, or the phone. Even the kids, who had somewhere else to be decide to come home. I just love it when they say, whats up? Lol... |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
7/16/2008 |
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hahahaha, you know this too well, I sure can relate to
"children’s laughter
outside the glass
just doesn’t fit
orgasmic state
and muffled scream
on tender neck
their bedeviled
clandestine date"
Love it! :-)
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| Reviewed by Tiana ~ |
7/15/2008 |
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| Gotta love those "Afternoon Delights" ;) Sensual, passionate poem, Fee ... hugs |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
7/15/2008 |
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LOL:) A quick stolen moment creates a rush like no other. You capture that "quick" feeling with burst-like imagery throughout. Way to write, Fee. Love and Hugs.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill |
7/14/2008 |
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You betcha!
If this (rodeo) trailer's rockin', don't bother knockin'...
Love the pic!
Love you, too.
R~
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
7/14/2008 |
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I Love That Photo Fee
and the buffet of lovers in this delishious afternoon meal to satisfy them hungry appetites..
Now This Is A Fine Lunch Hour Indeed
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
7/14/2008 |
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This pict. drives me NUTS! for nuts and something good and tasty!
I love this erotic short loving (secret daytime sexy time) Poem!
I want moreeeee... I wrote a short story today, based on the same premise when I finish! That is!I Love also your word choosing and your style of writing this out!
I love these times...
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and more, Love Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexooo |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
7/14/2008 |
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I want to know the address of that quick eatery, lunch...dinner...breakfast...you name it and I will lick the plate!
Georg |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
7/14/2008 |
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Reminds me of a country song from the 70's titled "Love in the afternoon" or something like that. Nice write.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
7/14/2008 |
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| i love it!! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
7/14/2008 |
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| What a lunch hour Fee!!! |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/14/2008 |
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Nice Fee, It's been a while for this for me though...
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
7/14/2008 |
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| Great write; excellent word choices - you've set the mood perfectly. |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
7/14/2008 |
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Nawwwwwwty but nice :)
Hugs Cherrypie |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
7/14/2008 |
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An artificial love night in the middle of the afternoon, oh yes we've been there a few times. Fantastic times and great write Cuz. thank you for sharing.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose |
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