|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Well done, Fee. I think. Never cared much for those
hot damn, thank you ma'am, trysts. But its better than
a martini lunch. -gene.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|OH those darn kids. You just can't get anything done. Trying to sneak a little and they are full of it. Liz|
|Reviewed by Debra Baker
I love this one. You captured the moment so well. A terrible thing when a couple can't seem to find that right moment to be together, alone...You know what I mean. Then, when it arrives, well the door bell rings, or the phone. Even the kids, who had somewhere else to be decide to come home. I just love it when they say, whats up? Lol...
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|hahahaha, you know this too well, I sure can relate to
outside the glass
just doesn’t fit
and muffled scream
on tender neck
Love it! :-)
|Reviewed by Tiana ~
|Gotta love those "Afternoon Delights" ;) Sensual, passionate poem, Fee ... hugs|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|LOL:) A quick stolen moment creates a rush like no other. You capture that "quick" feeling with burst-like imagery throughout. Way to write, Fee. Love and Hugs.
|Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
If this (rodeo) trailer's rockin', don't bother knockin'...
Love the pic!
Love you, too.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|I Love That Photo Fee
and the buffet of lovers in this delishious afternoon meal to satisfy them hungry appetites..
Now This Is A Fine Lunch Hour Indeed
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|This pict. drives me NUTS! for nuts and something good and tasty!
I love this erotic short loving (secret daytime sexy time) Poem!
I want moreeeee... I wrote a short story today, based on the same premise when I finish! That is!I Love also your word choosing and your style of writing this out!
I love these times...
Warmest Blessings and more, Love Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexooo
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|I want to know the address of that quick eatery, lunch...dinner...breakfast...you name it and I will lick the plate!
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Reminds me of a country song from the 70's titled "Love in the afternoon" or something like that. Nice write.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i love it!!|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|What a lunch hour Fee!!!|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Nice Fee, It's been a while for this for me though...
Much peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Great write; excellent word choices - you've set the mood perfectly.|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Nawwwwwwty but nice :)
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|An artificial love night in the middle of the afternoon, oh yes we've been there a few times. Fantastic times and great write Cuz. thank you for sharing.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose