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Last Wish
by Southern Comfort
Monday, July 14, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I step out into the darkness of the night,
I see one lone wishing star, glistening so bright.
I reach out to touch it, a gesture like a prayer,
I whisper," This is my last wish, please make him care",
A single tear glides down my cheek,
For I know that I won't get the wish I seek.
Being hopelessly romantic, I self destruct within,
My sorrow embraces me like a friend.
I whisper his name, while my tears fall like rain,
My heart still beats despite the pain.
I softly start to sing, Our Song,
The only thing that still remains, for all else is gone.
His memory like a restless spirit, haunts my mind,
How could he just up and leave me behind?
I held on to the love, so tightly, in total despair,
Now I finally realize, there was nothing really there.
The world is made for lovers, not for those who must play solitaire,
It has no time for the lonely, or values half a pair.
So wishing star, this is my last wish, my last try,
Then I will put this romantic heart away and let it slowly die.

Music: Only The Lonely


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Reviewed by Walt Hardester 7/18/2008
Very flowing poetry here.
You're depth shows with this write.

Walt
Reviewed by JAG Garcia 7/15/2008
I felt the dispair and loneliness as I read this one...Well focused and sustained sentiment... There's one thing about love... like hope, it eventually floats!
Reviewed by Paul Berube 7/15/2008
S.C.,

You really know how to tear the heart up. Let's hope for the comfort of that last wish. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 7/15/2008
That last wish should give free way for another first wish, as a cyclical wave of love comes around and around until we finally go like a champagne cork with that last pop! and a long deep last breath.

Georg
Reviewed by Alain Gracio 7/14/2008
I donīt want to set the world on fire, but this poem does it for me.
Touching and lovingly written, I feel your pain
Sincerely
Alain
Reviewed by Dalton James 7/14/2008
Little Darlin, Don't put that heart away just yet, love might come ridin in real soon. DJ
Reviewed by Rey C 7/14/2008
heartfelt!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 7/14/2008
Awww, this is so utterly sad and depressing and I so wish your heart finds what you are searching so hard for.....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/14/2008
Deeply moving portrait of longing and sadness - SC - this is powerfully penned. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 7/14/2008
The sense of loss is palpable, and the loneliness and the hope. Well written.
John
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/14/2008
It is true when we are hurt by love that falls apart it is hard to explain how badly we want a do over but only someone who is also hurt or has been hurt like this understands.

Well done SC
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 7/14/2008
Your last wish will be filled as for all those lonely hearts, for there is a match for each one of us SC. I love your writes and the music you pick is so perfect for the words you have shared. Thank you.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
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