|Reviewed by Mark Chevalier (Reader)
|The dark stranger emerges, to usher her through the door into a new life. So lovely your writing.
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Haunting & fantastic!
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|What an imagination you have! Holly|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Wow his eyes on this picture are very wicket
Just like you described him in this
Poem its enthralling and exciting and
I cant just imagine what she felt when
Neck was brushed with cold fingertips!
Awesome can't wait till I read the next one!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning Star
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Very suspenseful and intriguing, can't wait to read the next one.. Nicely done, Bravo, My dear Belle.
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Nice photograph, such pearcing eyes...Wow, I am getting goose bumps just reading this, so indepth. Haunting yet romantic overtones, well written piece...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Now I am going to need a night lite in my room and hubby is going to be peeved off. I just got the chills that I know won't go away La Belle.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Subtle crafts displayed here and the whole atmosphere reminds me of Heathcliff in 'Wuthering Heights' and Stanley and Blanche in 'Streetcar...'
Strong writing, Belle.
|Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)
|wonderful- i adore dark gothic poetry and tales, sage sweetwater suggested I came into your wonderful house, we are like kindred souls..as I write (or try to) goth too
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|sensual and spooky, good combination.|
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|Very interesting and fascinating !!!
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|I admire your talent to do this so well, Belle.
I'm afraid I don't have the patience for it,
or the skill. Beautifully done. -gene.
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|what a suspensful and well crafted story! Gave me the chills...|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|A dark bite this leaves upon the pulse of time...a time when stalkers came to their prey in a different way...thirsty, lusting for blood coating the tongue...intriguing genre, Belle...you do these so well, too...the key to a writer's success is to not pigeon-hole oneself into one genre, but rather, quill out of the box to pull in different readers...be well La Belle...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing your creative mind, Belle. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Getting better and better, and what a graphic!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|That pic is scary; so is the music; so is the tension leading up to the Encounter. Very, very well penned, La Belle, more please!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
|Oh this gave me a mean chill, Belle when he knew her name! Wonderfully written ... hugs|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wow second chapter even better than the first as the tension and heat steam up the night as to what will come next.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Maybe Lisette shouldn't fignt and surrender to the temptation, after all, pleasure beats pain by that beguiled mile!
Are that ink of yours no frozen yet?