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Tattletale!
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Tuesday, July 15, 2008
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Mischief drove the sun to
take huge bites out of my
cotton candy: look. Right
there. See the teeth marks? Not
fair. It was mine. She is

always nibbling away
at my snacks --- you should see
what she did to my ice
cream cone! Licked it and licked
it until it melted.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (7/15)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=jIC2fQQ-9Ok My first YouTube Video!! :)

and my second

www.youtube.com/watch?v=TVcR_xep2t4

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Reviewed by 000 000	1/2/2009

Karla, You see the world--sun and storms-with a vision quite different than anyone else! Great poem!




Reviewed by Jon Willey	7/17/2008

she is a formidable lady, is she not? -- I'll have a sugar cone with double dips of pistachio metaphors -- my pace be with you always JMW




Reviewed by Sheila Roy	7/16/2008

Karla, Cute poem, and I enjoyed the videos. Great work! Sheila




Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart	7/16/2008

I truly adore your imagination and these great metaphors you come up with




Reviewed by E T Waldron	7/16/2008

Your pics are fascinating karla,and I love this poem with it! Now off to see the you tube!YOu are somethin else lately;-)!!! Kudo's!...ET




Reviewed by Felix Perry	7/16/2008

Love it Karla, can almost picture a little girl on her back looking up at the sky on a summer day. Fee




Reviewed by Karen Palumbo	7/15/2008

Now that is a great shot! Cute, fun loving and very imaginative.... Be always safe, Karen




Reviewed by Axilea MU	7/15/2008

You interpret the sky here on earth... Axilea




Reviewed by Rose Rideout	7/15/2008

This is great Karla and I really enjoyed your youtube vidio. Thank you for sharing. Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose




Reviewed by Paul Berube	7/15/2008

Cute one Karla.




Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)	7/15/2008

loved the imagery, great piece




Reviewed by d. krusky	7/15/2008

Love the picture.....I took some almost the same last evening. Hmmmm....I wonder just how much cotton candy the sun ate? This poem is amusing, playful, and fun to read. I like the way you use the elements to create a story in a few words. Wonderful work! Smiles, Dorothy




Reviewed by Charlie	7/15/2008

I love the imagery in this-- implied, not over-stated. And it allows my mind to go wild-- a regular carnival of a feast I had, chewing on your sky-candy. --Charlie BTW:(amend "see" to "she")... awesome poem! I've missed reading you. There are simply too many poems for me to catch up... so if there's one or two in particular you'd like me to see, message me. :) (I'm done with my little project!!) (oooo, I'm SO done with it)




Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper	7/15/2008

An interesting analogy. I like that cotton candy in the sky, too.




Reviewed by Cryssa C	7/15/2008

hee, hee, hee.... Your sense of humor kills me! Cryssa :~)




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	7/15/2008

Thanks for the smile loved this one In Christs Love Michelle~




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	7/15/2008

enjoyable read!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis	7/15/2008

Love your wit, Karla ~ perfect summertime poem.




Reviewed by John Leko	7/15/2008

...wonderful and enjoyable write Karla... and along with others thoughts...this is clever. John




Reviewed by Nicky Goodman	7/15/2008

ditto karen, cute as - cheeky sunshine pfs




Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan	7/15/2008

cute and very clever!




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	7/15/2008

Be happy it ain't Rufuz licking at your cone, because with that tongue it would only take one lick and away would go your cone...Ed




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	7/15/2008

It wasn't me, so don't even START thinking that! LOL Delightful write; brava, Karla! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by Georg Mateos	7/15/2008

Not to worry, you will laugh yourself silly coming November's 100% cloudly skies...because you are dreaming of them, don't you? Georg




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	7/15/2008

Shame on Her! And tonight, tell the man in the moon what she did - he'll talk to her for you, and straighten everything out. And in this heat, I only eat my ice cream cones in the moonlight!




Reviewed by D Johnson	7/15/2008

Do I hear a little angst in your tone here, young lady? Nice write. Cheers, Dan

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