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Un]Comfort Zone
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Monday, July 21, 2008
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Hot out there ...

Image (c) 2006, Karla Dorman

... smothering blanket heat,
sweat. Blooming in the
secret places, expanding

to moisten all. And then
August to look forward to:
Summer. Never. Ends ....

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (7/21)

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Reviewed by Jon Willey	7/26/2008

" the long hot summer" -- I still prefer it to the long cold winter -- God bless --JMW




Reviewed by Charlie	7/22/2008

This is beautiful poetry. I love the first 3 1/2 lines especially...the end just sums it up, but the first part is really, quite beautiful. "blooming in teh secret places, expanding to moisten all..." Beautiful! --Charlie




*Reviewed by OnepoetGem the Poetic Rapper**	7/22/2008

hot here too Karla, almost 100 degrees, summer ends and then it's back to freezing, slipping andd sliding, nice down to hot heated earth verse hot cha




Reviewed by Rose Rideout	7/22/2008

Karla it will have to cool down sooner or later and then we'll be saying so darn cold wish it would warm up lol. Thank you for sharing. Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose




Reviewed by Georg Mateos	7/21/2008

August seems so far away and yet, you blink and there are you in the middle of September. Georg




Reviewed by Felix Perry	7/21/2008

Ahh but then it does and we wish the cold would go away but do not what you mean. hugs fee




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	7/21/2008

You warmed me up with this heat!! Or is the blush on my cheeks menupause...lol!! Very cold here though!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Bernice Angoh	7/21/2008

Beautiful lines, great photo!




Reviewed by Michael Guy	7/21/2008

almost like 2 haiku. Your great at short. And how true, though summer does eventually end, we are never far away from its most intense effects living in the sub-tropics. And now y'all in Texas will have a hurricane approaching the coast by tomorrow more than likely. Hope it doesn't hit further up where you are...HELLO DOLLY!




Reviewed by Gene Williamson	7/21/2008

So true, Karla. But then...we'll always have October. -gene.




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	7/21/2008

I bet t his is when you wish you were in A L A S K A! I know I am wishing this; I'd give anythin' to get outta HOT Texas!! Excellent write about a sore subject with us! Glad we have air conditioning!! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :P pant, pant




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	7/21/2008

Do I remember you complainin' about the winters colder weather or was that me...LOL, Ed




Reviewed by E T Waldron	7/21/2008

You have me sweating,Karla;-)...I just heard forecast for huge hurricain along whole coast of Texas. Please take care, even if you aren't in that area,I'm sure you'll get some of its effects to write about!...Love, ET




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	7/21/2008

It's been hot here too, thank you for sharing In Christ's Love Michelle~

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