You Can't Saddle The Wind
by Southern Comfort
Wednesday, July 30, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Women always take serious, what men poke in fun!
His car pulled away, leavin her in a cloud of dust,
He didn't look back, this man who took her trust.
She felt used and discarded, watchin him drive away,
She thought her love and body, would make him stay.
He told pretty lies, so her heart let him in,
She asked for forever, he said," You can't saddle the wind!"
His hands and lips brought her fireworks, every night,
She came undone, her muddled brain couldn't tell day from night.
His lips claimed her soul, while in his arms she lay,
He'd never speak of tomorrow, just said," Enjoy today!"
With artful hands and passion, her body he enticed,
He was her addiction, wanted at any price.
The love song had ended, the piper wanted pay,
He left her cryin and wished her a good day.
Her heart was broken and probably would never mend,
But that was the chance she took, cause you can't saddle the wind.
Music: The Wayward Wind
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|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Ah, but what a great ride.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|I love it SC and this so often happens in our lives. We give in so easily to our emotios only to be let down broken hearted. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|A voice from the heart that says so much, as the author delves into love that went astray. Well done SC, one of your best.
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Your quill dances on sublime clouds dropping wise dews to depict the story in "You Can't Saddle The Wind"... Outstanding composition in poetic expression to strike thoughts on the arcane of human minds.
May You enjoy a long healthy creative life through a blissful living.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Awwww, how sweetly this flows by your artful pen. Nope, you are sure right on that, "you can't saddle the wind" no way, no how. The heart will mend, it always does, but the memories will linger on...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Good, Comfort, once again. I like it, and I like the chance
that your heroine's heart will mend. -gene.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Best cure...throw that damn miserable no good heart away, then you can cackle your most contempt lugh in the face of any fool thinking they can broke a heart that you don't have.
You should see the surprise and fear in their eyes!
|Reviewed by Dalton James
|Not all men are hit and run lovers, some become friends with benefits. DJ
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|NO! YOU sure can't....or a FREE SPIRIT! ((as I am)) and
I have trouble trying to keep who I really am and can be!
YOU have no idea Sista! What this poem means to me, it's a
treasure I will savor! It shines in my soul, the context, the easy
way you have with your SHORT writing style! You have a way with words!
Truth told, she's better off without him, if he is to hold her back!
Love this song - Wayward Wind! I have it playing on 1 C.D. 7 times, one after another! in my Jeep and a few others on it...Great Poem!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexooo
STay Positive! Wasn't going to say/write it, but I even wiped a few tears away... YOu moved my soul Lady SC! Thank yOU!