Hailstorm Of Desire
by Southern Comfort
Friday, August 01, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Once again you have sought my bed,
You flee fron your chosen bitch, that plays with your head.
You tremble like a frightened little boy,
You are weary of being her abused toy!
Come into my arms and bed, suckle at my breast,
You can now relax and let me do the rest.
My gentle hands, bring your fallow flesh awake,
You moan as slumbering jewels tighten in desire's wake.
She had rendered you impotent, less than a man,
You need the magic workings of my hands.
Your pride begins to swell in rock hard fashion,
My womenly touch causes this reaction.
You beg for full release, you want to be taken in,
But you obey me, I alone will say when we shall blend.
You will endure this Hailstorm of desire,
For you know I can always take you higher.
In a fevered frenzy you call out my name,
As my mouth and hands drive you insane.
At the moment of no return, I take you in,
Now feel the Hailstorm of lust, as our flesh blends.
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|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wow, the strength of a woman is amazing when a dominant personality takes control...the best a man can do is sit back and do what they are told.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|I'll never look at hail real or symbolic the same way again. This has the power and thrust of full-blooded lust and eroticism. More, SC, more!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Wow: I'll never look at hail the same way again, SC! Well done! Fire and ice - perfect combination.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Hail Storm are too cold and cold mane everything to shrink, I think you should consider a vulcano storm, that will get the lava running.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Fire and Ice is what you are Comfort. A powerfully passionate write|
|Reviewed by Richard Orey
|Sounds very much like a woman who enjoys her work!
When you get an opening on your dance card, let me know. Private dancers who know their footwork are irresistible.
Right now, I can hardly breathe.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|I guess Ihave been through a few hailstorms myself, very enjoyable. Another great write and you are causing more than smiles, you keep them breathing. Thank you SC for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
It's a good thing Thunder and Lightning weren't playing. (lol)
Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Dalton James
|I like rough ridin and a woman that takes charge. DJ|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Damn, and I just had a shower not too long ago...oh well here I go again, this time cold...;) Ed|