Warm, Wet Pleasure
by Southern Comfort
Saturday, August 02, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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You slowly undress me and I step into a warm scented bath,
We have candles and chilled wine, to help the passion last.
You join me in the tub and I wrap my legs around your waist,
You always arouse me,so your maleness slips right into place.
I place the wine into my mouth and you suck if from my lips,
You caress my nipples with gentle fingertips.
You are like a wayward tide, as in and out you glide,
I sigh with pleasure as on desire's wave I ride.
My aqua eyes adore you, making your dark eyes smile,
As you stroke erect nipples, watching my reaction all the while.
Then you pour wine upon them, licking it all away,
Then warm lips capture one and your tongue begins to play.
We are encased in a warm, wet cocoon, we are Adam and Eve,
We are united as one, as our bodies cleave.
The warm water caresses our bodies as love sounds fill the room,
You are buried deep within me, my body is your tomb.
As orgasmic waves wash over us, we are at peace,
We sigh in unison, enjoying the sweet release.
Music: Let's Make Love
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|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Another great write SC, as you can tell so many had missed you for far too long. You keep them on their toes wishing and hoping. Thanks for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|In addition to everything else, Sweet Comfort, you're
a helluva fine writer. I might say, ah, gripping. -gene.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|The sensuality of your writes melts the coldest thoughts away and leaves a warm glow much like the afterglow of good sex. Nicely done SC
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|...and that's why I couldn't find the soap?
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
I love the gentleness and passion in your description from beginning until ebb tide. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I don't know anything about cocoon's but you did it again Mz SC...this could be my Birthday wish come true...;) Ed|