Karma
by Southern Comfort
Friday, August 08, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I sense that somewhere, a man rises to greet the day,
Does he feel that he has made wrong choices along the way?
Is his life full or is it incomplete?
Does his life lack passion, that his heart continues to seek?
Is he stuck in a loveless mundane life?
Trying to play the cards he was dealt, while living in strife?
Does he sense my existence and calls to me?
Wishing we could find each other and set our souls free?
Is he like me, staring into space,
Hoping that Karma will give us just one glimpse of each other's face.
Does he whisper his heart's desire to the wind?
Hoping that perchance our paths may meet and blend.
Does he feel, like I do, that he possesses the missing part,
The missing piece that will finally complete my heart.
Strange feelings let me know that he does exist,
I know he waits for me, just beyond Karma's mist.
I realize that until I meet him, my heart will wander endless,
My eyes will watch the horizon, hoping he will find me.
Will I die and never feel his touch?
Or experience his love that I need so much.
I ask Karma, to please be kind,
To let us find one another, somewhere in space and time.
Music: Karma
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
8/10/2008 |
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SC, I felt very connected to what your poem's message is. I too seek the same thing. I know he's out there for you and for me. Just keep putting it out to the Universe, he will hear...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/9/2008 |
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Hoping that Karma will give us just one glimpse of each other's face.
Does he whisper his heart's desire to the wind?
I think many can relate to what you express here, SC. So many people on this world and so many lonely and lost ones. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
8/9/2008 |
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SC, this is a very good write; filled with the need for hope and the belief that it (Karma and Mr. Right) exists and each of you are waiting for the other.
Peace,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by H Cruz |
8/8/2008 |
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| Shweeeet! |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
8/8/2008 |
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I would sure love to find this happen. Everyone deserves to find a true love in their lifetime. Thank you again SC for your beautiful heart touching write, absolutely beautiful.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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