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by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Monday, August 18, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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We are gathered here
to write verse
Most of us have the curse
or something more worse
Many of us write day and night
hey it's a poetic site
We suppose to write

Don't have to trim it
we have no limit
Sky is the limit
but most can't
get off the ground
their negative heads
hold them down

It is a known fact
that creativity
is affected by negativity
Any kind of hate or
resentment will slow
you down
Free your mind
and your azz will follow
It will be sitting with
the God's and angels
in the universe
You'll write and enjoy
unlimited verse

But first you have to
free your mind
or even here
you'll be blind


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Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 8/18/2008
You are so right. Great write. Great philosophy, great advice. You had it together enough to be able to tap into God's energy. Liz
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/18/2008
Good write, Gem; bravo! Yes, we are free to write, and write we do! Keep on keepin' on!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 8/18/2008
Yep-Here,There As Any Everywhere...


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