A lover's serenade
by Denise Edwards
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Galvan plays beneath Camille's window, a nightly plea of love.
Oh Love, let not the night escape
till first I hold your softness
let not this deep longing know loss
my eyes search night's velvet hue
for the exquisite form of you
Hark! Do I hear your footsteps
rushing towards me? Are you there?
or does the darkness play amusement
upon my hungry stare?
Come, one who holds my fondness
let us sear our bodies in love's caress
listen, lovebird, for my song
hasten to me, for this night is not long
We will dance among the stars
that brighten your eyes
and surrender to this hunger
I shall awaken your passion
with kisses upon your satiny thighs
as we feed the fire, you shall want no longer
your full breasts, I shall taste and adore
with hands and lips, I shall your body, explore
Hear these words, for only your ear
as I play upon my harp
this discourse to draw you near
so love can take us into flight
come, chere`, and give me the night!
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|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Lots of passion and fire in this Denise and you awaken the needs of the body and the passions of the heart.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Denise this is an exquisite poem, love it.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|WOW! What beauty and utter denying passionate LOVE, shared
exquisitely through your lines Denise! I could feel their embracements and sighs!
I am in awe of your talent!
I recently wrote of a harp too, their tones sooth!
This is a treasure I will savor, as of today I am TracKing you, and I will TRY and keep up, I have many I follow, their hearts touch mine deeply!
Your writing style is familiar, as Hamlet and I simply adored it!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Soulful SHEExooo
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Such passionate expression, Denise. I am breathing in your verses. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,