|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|A lovely write Fee. Enjoyed it very much.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|OMG, I love this poem, the flowwwwwww toppled like the waves breaking against the stones!
This tore at my heart fee, I love these thoughts myself!
BEACH 24/7 WoULD be the Perfect DREAM! Maybe? I can make a poem out of that... YOu inspiring me again???
Keep this youthful feeling going Sweetie, the beach bum in you in shining through!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Soulful SHEExooo
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Fee....ahhhh yes the beach & the feel of the tides...so beautiful
I hope the lady showed up :)
I like the vision & the songs of love you play for her on your guitar
Your such a romantic man :)
Much Love To You Always & the salts of the sea kissing you freely
Embraced ~ Embrassť
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Another photo catching my eye right away. Been to beach just yesterday, Peace and quiet abound there. While feeding the seagulls I surely did miss my Tom and now am a loner in life indeed.|
|Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
|I love the beach. It always gives me a sense of freedom and melancholy. (spelling)
Those are beautiful verses, Fee. Though they are sad, I still read your contentness between the lines.
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|Sweetly adorable! I know she will return, cause a good Poetry Man is hard to find. HUGS! SC|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Another Magnificent write of true romance
I agreed with you I too love the Idea of
Living and loving on a beach
Love how your words captured such beautiful imagery
And a perfect picture of a Beach Bums and Love!!
Peace Love and Hugssss...Morning Star
|Reviewed by David Delaney
|Beautiful writing Felix, love every word mate. Well done.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|a sad write full of longing--well expressed|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Fee, my beach is west, way west of the Mississippi River and I understand why you love the beach. There is nothing so majestic as watching the Pacific roll up to our sandy home. Love that picture too!
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|This is so nice and vivid! I can see you there, Fee, in white shorts, barefoot, open cotton shirt blowing in the breeze, walking near the beach with a tin cup of rum!|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|...those of us who belong to the Beach Bums Union don't appreciate the term beach bum being used by non-beach bums...;) e|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|I'm amazed by how creative you are, Fee. You seem to never run out of ideas, and you must have more than one romantic bone in your body - because the romance is endless with you. Love the imagery in this one...very vivid. You've also created a laid-back, yet sad feel. Crafted nicely! Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
I walk my beach well..picking up some shell
Looking for some answers
But what a disaster,a heavy swell nocks me over
I cry out of laughter
Now I walk my beach with you Beach Bum...lol
My feet in your feet , My eyes is your eyes
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
Here's to the magic of the sea, Salute! Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|O, now it's Fee the Beach Bum. LOL Cute!! Love this write; very well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
The beach is okay; just not really into it. That's more Karla's speed. :) She's the Beach Bum of my family! LOL
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Keep singing, Beach Bum; she's sure to hear you eventually.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|love-love this,, I can picture it all in my head,, romance burning in the heart of a love.. she will be there I am sure of it.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Well, I hope you'll get your sweet beach lady tonight...
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|I think this poem is so sweet and youthful. I somehow pictured you with a Hawaiian shirt on and white trousers...lol (Jimmy buffet esquire)
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Enjoyed this beach bum's tale, Fee|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|A nostalgic and sweet poem Fee.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Ohhhh I am sure she will show up now for sure and she probably left because she was getting tired of waiting for that magic question. Another great write Fee. Thank you for sharing.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose