Join (Free!) | Login  

     Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
   Services MarketPlace (Free to post!)
Where Authors and Readers come together!


Featured Authors:  J.E. Thompson, iBrad Bathgate, iArthur Jackson, iLem Yedowicz, iSandi Schraut, iSubbarao Mukkavilli, iKarl Morgan, i

  Home > Literary Criticism > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

· Become a Fan
· Contact me
· Success story
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Blog
· 3,672 Titles
· 17,093 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
Member Since: Nov, 2002

OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.

Featured Book
In Defense Of The Cross Of Christ
by Steven Holley

Penetrating analysis of cause and cure of spiritual anemia, counterfeit Christianity, and shipwrecked leadership. Based on Philippians 3:18, “For many walk, of whom I hav..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members

Featured Book
Funny Side Up - The Book
by al squitieri,sr

"The stories are timely, but not timeless, and close to universal experiences, out-doing many tired elements around today" (Richard Armour)..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members

Popular Poetry (Literary Criticism)
  1.  As What Did It Solve...
  2.  As More Thought You Seen Heard It All...
  3.  As What You Don't Know I Do...

Add a Poem
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Friday, August 29, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Become a Fan

Recent poems by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
•  I Wish U Well
•  Paper Bag Poet
•  Thorns End
•  Pissed Off People
•  Deliver Us From Evil
           >> View all 3,666

Flash from the past.

Scarey button when
i first started writing verse
Writing my first poem
was even worse
I was attacked
felt like the duck
that quacked

Every time I pushed
this button
I certainly didn't
feel like E F Hutton
When E F Hutton talks
everyone listens

I barely got a review
then I got a few
sometimes I didn't
know what to do
but keep on writing
and keep on fighting

Nothing much has changed
other than
my verse
its gotten a little better
and not so worse
My attitude
I'm less rude
got a stronger tude
at times will still feud



Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!

Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 8/31/2008
such a journey all this versing can be!! enjoyed!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 8/29/2008
You, RUDE...? I find that hard to believe...Ed
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce 8/29/2008
Can I invent a medical new word?
"Verbalitis" - haha!!! Gradyyyy...I'm just jokinnngggg!!!

Luvya, verbalitis expert,

Sandie Angel :o)

Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us

Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
© AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.