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by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Friday, August 29, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Flash from the past.

Scarey button when
i first started writing verse
Writing my first poem
was even worse
I was attacked
felt like the duck
that quacked

Every time I pushed
this button
I certainly didn't
feel like E F Hutton
When E F Hutton talks
everyone listens

I barely got a review
then I got a few
sometimes I didn't
know what to do
but keep on writing
and keep on fighting

Nothing much has changed
other than
my verse
its gotten a little better
and not so worse
My attitude
I'm less rude
got a stronger tude
at times will still feud

OnepoetGem

 


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Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 8/31/2008
such a journey all this versing can be!! enjoyed!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 8/29/2008
You, RUDE...? I find that hard to believe...Ed
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce 8/29/2008
Can I invent a medical new word?
"Verbalitis" - haha!!! Gradyyyy...I'm just jokinnngggg!!!

Luvya, verbalitis expert,

Sandie Angel :o)

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