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As if I were dying.... poem by: Linda Law
by Linda Law
Thursday, September 04, 2008
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Some days, the smiles are forced, the laughs will crack, and our hearts are broken.. yet we cannot give up.. :-)
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Last night I felt as if I were dying
It was as if I didn't even feel like trying
There was no reason, no big event
Don't understand why my heart is spent
There is so much to do these days
If I could just lie down and count the ways
To get through without feeling so blue
When you were here life felt brand new
Who knows why I was left behind
The reasons are many, so says my mind
Life moved on, and I've tried too
Once I was needed, always too much to do
It's over, I know..just passing time
I smile, I laugh, no reason, no rhyme
Last night I felt as if I were dying
I don't want to, but I know I'll keep trying

 

 

 

As if I were dying...poem by: Linda Law

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Reviewed by Bonnie May 9/13/2008
You go girl never give up or stop trying what stength and inspiration you've described. Loved this sad but beautful poem. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Valerie Roeske 9/6/2008
Yet sad this is so beautifully written, hang on to faith, take care Valerie
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 9/5/2008
poignant
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 9/4/2008
A piece so deep, so soul searching as one reaches out trying to make some sense of what is left. Yet it is our destiny to keep moving forward, keep trying. Remember that God is with us all....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/4/2008
These are deeply moving sentiments, Linda. I do wish you strength and happiness and all good things. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/4/2008
I dearly hope this is just your imagination coming into play for we have just found you on the den and need your voice and your talent here with us.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/4/2008
Linda,

Sadness in lines of trying to go on, despite the pain ... well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre 9/4/2008
Yes. keep writing & all the best to you my friend!
Reviewed by Stuart McCallum 9/4/2008
You are here to love and remember him, and to keep writing which will help to ease your pain.

Heartfelt piece Linda,
Happiness Stuart
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/4/2008
Great writing and art, Linda; you are a marvel! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 9/4/2008
We will never understand the reasons why Linda, but I am sure there is a reason, we may never get the answers but life has to go on if for no one else but us. Take care friend.

Newfie hugs,Rose
Reviewed by Tabitha Carter 9/4/2008
You are left to love for him. You are left to remember him. No one knows him like you do, you are left to make him less blue while he is without you. This is very heart felt, Linda. Carry on knowing that you made him happy and it is only you that his happiness can live through. And yes, keep trying.
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 9/4/2008
Sometimes happens in your life making you feel that way. Or maybe for no reason. This reflects the feelings that many of us having after losing someone.

Mary
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 9/4/2008
Yesterday I felt the same way, honest. I took Goldie to the grocers and she said I don't want you to die of heartbreak. I said I'd of died long ago if that were the case in fact. I just was not myself either yesterday. Your drawing is good. Love watermelon all year round in fact. My favorite food in fact.
Reviewed by George Carroll 9/4/2008
Art and poem are excellent. Hang in there Linda.
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 9/4/2008
Pastel and charcoal always bring one out of a dark mood...melancholy days are best replaced with watermelon wine, Linda! Tom T. Hall said it best...old dogs and watermelon wine, yep....you need to do some porch sittin' with a stack of Extraordinary Visits and autograph the jug! Be well, Linda...

Love,
Sage
Reviewed by Denise Edwards 9/4/2008
Linda, I know that feeling so well. You caught the depth of loss and pain so well here. I love this!

Warm hugs

Dee
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