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  Unfolded
by Janet P Caldwell
Saturday, September 06, 2008
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A poem for Alan Phillips, my husband.


I watched the tendrils of vaporous smoke
escape from your nostrils, as the sun broke

Fog dissipating, horizon is clear
holding your hand in the early morn chill

I saw the ash fall to the hard concrete
reddish glow did blaze then fell near my feet

Seeing the optimism in your eyes
I took off my mask, unveiled my disguise

My own eyes mirrored your furious light
the cigarette dropped, you grasped me with might

Your lips found mine, taste of orange sunshine
thawing my frigid heart just this one time

So far it's been six years, I did unfold
I'll never regret that day in the cold

Alan thank you for communing with me
for reaching in for seeing past the mask

For finding me, for loving me, for acceptance at last

I love you

Janet Caldwell 9-6-08
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Reviewed by Theresa Koch
This is beautiful sweet friend!
Reviewed by Joy Leftow
Isn't your husband lucky to have you also ~ someone who writes him love poems. It's always wonderful to have that person who sees the real "me". That's what we all seek!
Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Life unfolds in many different ways ... thanks for sharing.

Sandy
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Janet this is one of the sweeter poems I've read lately,
Heart felt and real. Well done.

Walt
Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Wow, you are both so very lucky, beautiful.
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Obviously he's so lucky. Nice tribute to him from a special person.
Reviewed by Sandra Hartsell
Janet,
This is very nice and very touching. It is so sweet, when you find someone who excepts you like you are. Thank you for sharing.
Lee
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
What a beautiful ode to love: and what a cutie your hubby is! Lucky you!! Well done, Janet.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
good one
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Romantic You!

TRASK
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Honestly true and loving sentiments; your verses reach right into the soul, Janet. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and best wishes to you,



Regis

PS: I've just read Jude's comments after writing my own. I guess he and I are on the same page.
Reviewed by Valerie Roeske
Janet,
The beauty found within the words, he accepted you for you, true love, Take care Valerie
Reviewed by jude forese
honest, loving, truly lovely ...
Reviewed by Felix Perry
I love the blunt honesty of this poem to your husband. Well done.
hugs
Fee
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