Lets go to the beach, dad…by Rufuz
by Ed Matlack
Tuesday, September 09, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I wanna go to the beach,
Dad has to drive me,
As for walking its outta reach,
Its early in the morning, how do you suppose,
I should get him outta bed…
If we leave real soon,
No thunderstorms will we get,
They will slide in this afternoon,
Then we won’t get to go till tomorrow round noon…
The water is warm, the air is as well,
Going to the beach today sure would be swell,
But dads still sleepin’, darn & dammit to hell, (sorry ladies)
If you talk to dad, of those swear words don’t tell…J
© Rufuz J 9/9/08
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|Reviewed by Linda Hill
Ha ha Bark a little, that'll get him up. As for the bad words...shhhhhh....your secrets safe with me:) Have FUN!
|Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse
|Nice! There's always the bus but that could take half-a-day and how old is the son? Isn't it true that some days are perfect for the beach or the mountains, anywhere close to nature and away from streets and mechanical noise.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Have fun Rufie!!
Love AUntie sTinky
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Great day to you Rufuz and Ed. I'd love to be there at the beach with you today. Warmest waters this time of year. Jump in and swim Rufuz, enjoy'''|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I don't blame Rufus, if it is a nice day you should be up and about and taking your little buddy to the beach like he wants.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Enjoy your day Rufuz and you and Daddy stay safe.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Dad. Please. Your little boy wants to go to the beach! Later you sleep, less time you have before the storms roll in. As my T.I. in basic used to say, MOVE IT MOVE IT MOVE IT! LOL
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Chew one of his big toes, that will get him up and running!
And for those *%&£$ words...ain't telling nutin'
|Reviewed by George Thompson
|Rufuz has a mind of his own. If he could only figure out a way to get dad out of bed....
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|Heehee!!! Rufuz is sure poetic!!! You can whip out rhyming poems so effortlessly each time I read.
You take care of your daddy well and you two have lots of fun!
Aunt Sandie :o)
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Dammit to hell, (sorry ladies), get up you lazy bum, and take Rufie for a walk! And find some more coins on that beach; you still owe me - big time!
Was that OK, Rufie Boy?
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Ok Dad come on listen up and head to the beach, keep Rufuz happy and cool. Great write, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Rufuz my dear, lick daddy's nose, if that doesn't work, do what my Nika (Newfie)does, bellow in his ear. Oh poor daddy...Maybe not bellow Rufuz, try just the licking, that definately works. Good poem Rufuz, but no more cussing. Love ya, Dr. Bonnie|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|I closed my pool some years back so my dog Mac never got to know how refreshing a daily swim can be.|
|Reviewed by Valerie Roeske
Loved this write, funny thing the other day I couldn't pry my son away from the beach, Take care valerie