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Lerwyn
by Regis Auffray

Sunday, September 14, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I woke up in the middle of the night and there it was. A bizarre encounter but beautiful at the end. No. It is not Arwen (Queen Evenstar) from Lord of the Rings... ...It is clearly Lerwyn.


Lerwyn
 
In the presence
Of this buffoon
Of a man
So full of himself
Arrogant
Insensitive
In close proximity
To this pompous ass
Although I am not
Prone to anger
I felt that monster
Stir
I closed my eyes
And when I opened them
I was bathed in the light
Of Lerwyn
 
Now all is well
 
 
 
© Copyright 2008     Regis Auffray

 

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Reviewed by lois christensen 8/16/2014
I'm glad you stated it wasn't you, we all know you're not like this, but sometimes dreams are a nightmare type of thing to some people. I myself do dream mostly good, not many nightmares appear for me.
Reviewed by Nicole Weaver 8/22/2009
Regis,
You did it again, another masterpiece. Merci.
Nicole
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 1/15/2009
Isn't it wonderful how our dreams can take us away to such lovely places ... Lerwyn must have been quite beautiful as I'm sure she represents all that is good in our hopes and fantasies...she takes away the harshness of reality. Thought-provoking piece, as always. Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 10/22/2008
A misqouted anology of self ,,, Me thinks... Dreams can be sur-real, or can they?....M
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 10/12/2008
Regis,

Thanks so much for your reviews - it appears that I must have ESP lol.

Every poem you write is skillfully molded - words; image; thought, feeling . . . then you add your inner soul, and the 'outcome' (poem) is written. Written superlatively - each and every one a masterpiece!!


Best regards,

Lance
Reviewed by Pierre Ortega 9/30/2008
In her wake, I stand guilty, and convicted, and redeemed.

Take Care, Pierre
Reviewed by D Johnson 9/28/2008
Short and sweet, and written quite well.

Peace,
Dan
Reviewed by 000 000 9/27/2008
This writing has power and I am glad Lerwyn watches: to calm as needed.
An awesome photo!
CarolHawks
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 9/26/2008
Beautiful poem, Reg. Surreal and intriguing offering.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Denise Edwards 9/24/2008
Lovely and enchanting!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 9/24/2008
Ahhh...a happy ending. Liz
Reviewed by Tony Jenkins 9/22/2008
A stirring monster !

Could be good ?

Tony
Reviewed by Art Sun 9/21/2008
Nice work Reg...interestingly the Light is where we find our strength...as you well state

Now All is well...

nicely done my friend...

Art Sun...
Reviewed by Shedding Light 9/21/2008
A very intersting write!!

Harold M. Nash
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/21/2008
Thank you for the inspiration dear one!!

Love TinkaSweets
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 9/20/2008
excellent read
Reviewed by Jerry Engler 9/19/2008
Interesting and introspective write, Regis. You reached inside, and connected with the better part--great expression....Jerry
Reviewed by Kenny Baez 9/19/2008
Count to ten, they say, before you vent your anger. Smiling in the face of malignity! Good Lerwyn!
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 9/18/2008
sounds good to me Reg, if it makes you ok especially
Reviewed by Linda Law 9/18/2008
Somewhere in between fantasy, dreams and reality.... that is where you took me thru this wonderful piece... thank you...it is magical.
lindalaw
Reviewed by Glenda Bixler 9/18/2008
Comment: May you stay in the beautiful light...
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 9/18/2008
I absolutely LOVE this poem, it's mysterious and beautifully written.
Reviewed by Denise Nowakowski 9/18/2008
Hi Regis,
Saved by Lerwyn! Expressive. It stirred my imagination. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.
Denise Nowakowski
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 9/17/2008
Regis,
I like how you've been sharing your dreams as of late. Extremely creative. This poem feels like that deep breath we take to move on after a hard moment. Intense write!
Sheila
Reviewed by A PAX 9/16/2008
ahhh
you were chosen :)
nice visuals.........pax A
Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello 9/16/2008
Hello Regis,

Wow. From ugliness to wellness. So graphic are your words.

Cynthia
Reviewed by Michael Guy 9/16/2008
This one goes by me; I'm not well read in fantasy/myth books and haven't read The Ring since I was 11 - I didn't even see the movie! But I get the picture now that I now she's a she... Nice.
Reviewed by Valerie Roeske 9/16/2008
Regis,
The gift of the minds wonder, Brillant read, Take care Valerie
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 9/16/2008
NICE!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Michelle Mead 9/15/2008
Wow, interesting dream! Right to the point. Thanks for sharing it with us, Regis.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 9/15/2008
How deeply soothing and leaves the mind to wonder....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Susie McCray 9/15/2008
Very nice poem.
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 9/15/2008
Well crafted. Though not familiar with this Lerwyn I enjoyed the poem so much. Your past is the future of others
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 9/15/2008
Fabulous writing Regis, sometimes dreams can open unexpected doors...
peace and love, Carole~
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 9/15/2008
Wonferful writing sweet man..sweet dream ...oh my...be well and safe always..Hugssssss
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 9/15/2008
La lumière qui purifie, dépure et cure, mon Ami... la seule qu'il faut laisser notre vue suivre, la seule qui rend les monstres... aussi invisibles qu'ils le sont (et c'est leur tragédie), en fait.
Amour et lumière, toujours,
Alexandra*
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante 9/15/2008
Ah the beauty of such dreams, enjoyed the poem very much.
Reviewed by Mark Chevalier (Reader) 9/15/2008
This was a charming piece of work. I can picture her in radiant robes, and porcelain skin...
So very nicely done.
Mark
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/15/2008
Being bathed in the light of Lerwyn, sounds marvelous.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/14/2008
I need to comment here. This "man" person. This is NOT me. I'm not like that at all. People who know me will attest to that. I actually don't even like being labeled as a "guy." I am not at all like the man I met in this encounter.



Regis
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo 9/14/2008
Revelations about oneself ... when we recognize our short comings ---- there is light all around us. I truly enjoyed this.

God bless you. Kathy
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 9/14/2008
How very lovely to wake to such as you described.
hugsd
Kathy Lynn
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen 9/14/2008
purified!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 9/14/2008
a beautiful write-enjoyed
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 9/14/2008
Isn't it wonderful when a dream can open up a piece of our soul, to find a sanctuary of peace, love, and light! Beautiful words written here Reg, I loved this poem
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Michelle Mills 9/14/2008
I'm not familiar with who Lerwyn is, but I recognize a quality write when I read one...the descriptions used for the man in the piece are outstanding (although harsh and I certainly hope they are not being used to describe the author!) You are, and will undoubtedly always remain one of my favorite writers on the planet Reg...Love you, Michelle
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce 9/14/2008
Regis:

I agree with James' comment. A rather unique write!!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by J. Pajot 9/14/2008
Mystical write. Like this...though sometimes it is better to let the anger out than suppress it into resentment...enjoyable read.
All good things to you,
Jim
Reviewed by William Potter 9/14/2008
I think most men could do with a visit an occasional from Lerwyn, when our arrogant, insensitive, angry side raises its ugly head. I believe my wife might concur.

A well written thought inspiring write!

Take care,

William
Reviewed by John Flanagan 9/14/2008
Was or is this a dream that carried into waking? There's an epiphany here and it's wonderfully conveyed.
John
Reviewed by Bonnie May 9/14/2008
You had me with Lord of the Rings but as I kept reading, I was totally enthralled. Great write, Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by George Carroll 9/14/2008
What we seen in the mirror is not what is seen in the heart and yours is bursting with love.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 9/14/2008
I engage with the mystery of this, Regis... perhaps I am not alone in being totally iggo as to who Lerwyn is, but you captivate us with your honest account, told concretely, but permeated with awe at the power and supernatural-ness of this beautiful encounter. We would all take issue with how you appear to describe "yourself", but the fact that you are humbled by this divine Presence is sufficient to enfold us in the reverence of the moment. Whenever we need him/her, the Presence that speaks blessing and annointing on our soul is always manifestly there with us. Well indeed! Love, Kate xx
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 9/14/2008
I like this Regis...always looking on the bright side of things, very nice indeed. Holly
Reviewed by Stan Grimes 9/14/2008
marvelous write.
Reviewed by Stephen Pollard 9/14/2008
Would make for a great series of short stories
centering around this spectacular vision.

Well done Reg,

Stephen Pollard



Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/14/2008
I have no clue as to who she is, but this is a great write, Regis! Very well penned; bravo!

(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :)
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 9/14/2008
Oooooo my oh my...how lovely Regis..

Vesna .)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/14/2008
Magical dreamscapes are such a delight!
And they have healing powers too!;-)Love, it!

ET
Reviewed by Ann Marquette 9/14/2008
Well done Regis...
Ah what dreams do to us! :-)
ann
Reviewed by George Thompson 9/14/2008
Fantasyland and faerie tales. Well done.

George
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/14/2008
Don't know who Lerwyn was, but a vision MUCH nicer than a monster. However: is Lerwyn a demon in disguise?? Much to ponder, here: well done, Regis.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 9/14/2008
a vision? nicely detailed
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 9/14/2008
Was it a dream or real, either way a fantasy of wonderful proportions...ed



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