|Reviewed by lois christensen
|I'm glad you stated it wasn't you, we all know you're not like this, but sometimes dreams are a nightmare type of thing to some people. I myself do dream mostly good, not many nightmares appear for me.
|Reviewed by Nicole Weaver
You did it again, another masterpiece. Merci.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Isn't it wonderful how our dreams can take us away to such lovely places ... Lerwyn must have been quite beautiful as I'm sure she represents all that is good in our hopes and fantasies...she takes away the harshness of reality. Thought-provoking piece, as always. Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|A misqouted anology of self ,,, Me thinks... Dreams can be sur-real, or can they?....M|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Thanks so much for your reviews - it appears that I must have ESP lol.
Every poem you write is skillfully molded - words; image; thought, feeling . . . then you add your inner soul, and the 'outcome' (poem) is written. Written superlatively - each and every one a masterpiece!!
|Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
|In her wake, I stand guilty, and convicted, and redeemed.
Take Care, Pierre
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Short and sweet, and written quite well.
|Reviewed by 000 000
|This writing has power and I am glad Lerwyn watches: to calm as needed.
An awesome photo!
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Beautiful poem, Reg. Surreal and intriguing offering.
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|Lovely and enchanting!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Ahhh...a happy ending. Liz|
|Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
|A stirring monster !
Could be good ?
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Nice work Reg...interestingly the Light is where we find our strength...as you well state
Now All is well...
nicely done my friend...
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|A very intersting write!!
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Thank you for the inspiration dear one!!
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Jerry Engler
|Interesting and introspective write, Regis. You reached inside, and connected with the better part--great expression....Jerry|
|Reviewed by Kenny Baez
|Count to ten, they say, before you vent your anger. Smiling in the face of malignity! Good Lerwyn!|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|sounds good to me Reg, if it makes you ok especially|
|Reviewed by Linda Law
|Somewhere in between fantasy, dreams and reality.... that is where you took me thru this wonderful piece... thank you...it is magical.
|Reviewed by Glenda Bixler
|Comment: May you stay in the beautiful light...|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|I absolutely LOVE this poem, it's mysterious and beautifully written.|
|Reviewed by Denise Nowakowski
Saved by Lerwyn! Expressive. It stirred my imagination. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
I like how you've been sharing your dreams as of late. Extremely creative. This poem feels like that deep breath we take to move on after a hard moment. Intense write!
|Reviewed by A PAX
you were chosen :)
nice visuals.........pax A
|Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Wow. From ugliness to wellness. So graphic are your words.
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|This one goes by me; I'm not well read in fantasy/myth books and haven't read The Ring since I was 11 - I didn't even see the movie! But I get the picture now that I now she's a she... Nice.|
|Reviewed by Valerie Roeske
The gift of the minds wonder, Brillant read, Take care Valerie
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|NICE!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|Wow, interesting dream! Right to the point. Thanks for sharing it with us, Regis.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|How deeply soothing and leaves the mind to wonder....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Susie McCray
|Very nice poem.|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Well crafted. Though not familiar with this Lerwyn I enjoyed the poem so much. Your past is the future of others|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Fabulous writing Regis, sometimes dreams can open unexpected doors...
peace and love, Carole~
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Wonferful writing sweet man..sweet dream ...oh my...be well and safe always..Hugssssss|
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|La lumière qui purifie, dépure et cure, mon Ami... la seule qu'il faut laisser notre vue suivre, la seule qui rend les monstres... aussi invisibles qu'ils le sont (et c'est leur tragédie), en fait.
Amour et lumière, toujours,
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|Ah the beauty of such dreams, enjoyed the poem very much.|
|Reviewed by Mark Chevalier (Reader)
|This was a charming piece of work. I can picture her in radiant robes, and porcelain skin...
So very nicely done.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Being bathed in the light of Lerwyn, sounds marvelous.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I need to comment here. This "man" person. This is NOT me. I'm not like that at all. People who know me will attest to that. I actually don't even like being labeled as a "guy." I am not at all like the man I met in this encounter.
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Revelations about oneself ... when we recognize our short comings ---- there is light all around us. I truly enjoyed this.
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|How very lovely to wake to such as you described.
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|a beautiful write-enjoyed|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Isn't it wonderful when a dream can open up a piece of our soul, to find a sanctuary of peace, love, and light! Beautiful words written here Reg, I loved this poem
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Michelle Mills
|I'm not familiar with who Lerwyn is, but I recognize a quality write when I read one...the descriptions used for the man in the piece are outstanding (although harsh and I certainly hope they are not being used to describe the author!) You are, and will undoubtedly always remain one of my favorite writers on the planet Reg...Love you, Michelle|
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
I agree with James' comment. A rather unique write!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by J. Pajot
|Mystical write. Like this...though sometimes it is better to let the anger out than suppress it into resentment...enjoyable read.
All good things to you,
|Reviewed by William Potter
|I think most men could do with a visit an occasional from Lerwyn, when our arrogant, insensitive, angry side raises its ugly head. I believe my wife might concur.
A well written thought inspiring write!
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Was or is this a dream that carried into waking? There's an epiphany here and it's wonderfully conveyed.
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|You had me with Lord of the Rings but as I kept reading, I was totally enthralled. Great write, Love, Bonnie|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|What we seen in the mirror is not what is seen in the heart and yours is bursting with love.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|I engage with the mystery of this, Regis... perhaps I am not alone in being totally iggo as to who Lerwyn is, but you captivate us with your honest account, told concretely, but permeated with awe at the power and supernatural-ness of this beautiful encounter. We would all take issue with how you appear to describe "yourself", but the fact that you are humbled by this divine Presence is sufficient to enfold us in the reverence of the moment. Whenever we need him/her, the Presence that speaks blessing and annointing on our soul is always manifestly there with us. Well indeed! Love, Kate xx|
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|I like this Regis...always looking on the bright side of things, very nice indeed. Holly|
|Reviewed by Stan Grimes
|Reviewed by Stephen Pollard
|Would make for a great series of short stories
centering around this spectacular vision.
Well done Reg,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|I have no clue as to who she is, but this is a great write, Regis! Very well penned; bravo!
(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :)
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Oooooo my oh my...how lovely Regis..
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Magical dreamscapes are such a delight!
And they have healing powers too!;-)Love, it!
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|Well done Regis...
Ah what dreams do to us! :-)
|Reviewed by George Thompson
|Fantasyland and faerie tales. Well done.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Don't know who Lerwyn was, but a vision MUCH nicer than a monster. However: is Lerwyn a demon in disguise?? Much to ponder, here: well done, Regis.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|a vision? nicely detailed|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Was it a dream or real, either way a fantasy of wonderful proportions...ed|