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by Amber V Moonstone
Friday, September 19, 2008
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photo: Woman holding roses stock photo


By Amber “V” Moonstone



Our Essence to mingle

Within the daydreams of our minds

The anticipation sends prisms of colors

Within my yearning heart.


You will be in my arms at long last,

No longer a daydream, but a reality,

Taking my soul and body,

Toward that awaited fulfillment.


The clock ticks down,

Only one hour till we kiss

Each other’s soft lips,

Tasting in the wine of effervescence.


I dress with care,

Dabbing my perfume

In all the right places,

Awaiting your approval.


I daydream of you kissing

And touching each

Of these scented places,

That has craved your touch.


Desire wells up in my stomach,

Sending warm waves toward

Womanly pleasures,

Throbbing with anticipation.



Oh, sweet man,

Come to me,

For we will be united,

With such ecstasy and pleasure.


I approach the street corner,

And beneath the dimly lit lamp,

I see a single red rose

With a note attached to it.


“My dearest love,

We have waited so long for this moment,

I am afraid to see you, for fear you will not

Think I am worthy of your love.  I am so sorry,

I could not stay, Perhaps it was just never meant to be.”


I begin to weep, and clutch the rose,

Blood trickles down my hand,

The thorns are now my agony,

A reminder of the pain you have given me.


“Father in Heaven,

Please send him back to me,

I feel it in my heart, that his fear

Is unwarranted!


 Please my love,

Come back to me.

I will wait here

Till the sun comes up.




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Reviewed by William Bonilla
One of your most beautifully written poetry
Peace to you my dear friend
Love & peace

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
...May there be no thorns to bleed,,, Very beautiful Amber full of deep emotions.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
I can feel the quiver of anticipation from years ago as I awaited the love of my life and dreams and it took five years but here it is thirty-six years later. Well worth the anticipation.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
WOW! What a sadness you portrayed Viv!
HOpe he decides before it's too late!
Follow your heart!
Lovely sad poem!of yearning and wanting to it's lasting depths mentioned and felt!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful SHEExooo

STay Positive!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
So bittersweet, Amber, but many prayers and hopes do get answered.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
I soon as I find my shoes!
You romantic you!

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Beautiful, and romantic. Hope he comes back:)

Many blessings,
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Such a sad ending to the anticipation of love. Beautiful pen.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Beautiful, Amber; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
What a beautiful write Amber. Tastefully sizziling.
Reviewed by Bonnie May
You talk about HOT my girl this truly was but so beautiful and heart touching. Your write had me gripped from the very first verse and I couldn't stop. Felt lost when it was over. Well done my friend, Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Painful but reality story that although I hope it hasn't happened to you dear Amber has no doubt happened to others. Well imaged words...
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
Ah man ~ I'm a "happy ending" kind of certainly pull the reader in with this one, Amber - leaving us to long for a consummation of love. Nice work!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wow, Amber, this one is passionate, and yearning for that special touch! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Oh my! An unexpected twist! Excellent poem
beautifully written, Amber...ET
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
How this turned around, Amber. Romantic and yet so sad.
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
It's sad to think that all those beautiful lines
wind up in pain. You do this so well, Amber. Now,
how about having some fun? -gene.
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Oh myyyyyyyy,beautiful writing sweet lady..just like well and always safe....Hugssss,much love too you as well...
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
This is an amazing poem that you have written.Your soul just comes out by the expression of your words and feelings.I enjoy reading it,take care

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Beautifully worded and expressed! The sadness reaches out and touches the reader. SC
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