|Reviewed by Hiren Shah
|Anything written on mother can only be an understatement. A very nice effort. Maybe you could look up Varanasi Rao(author)'s "The Mother"|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Love your write ! It touched me deeply|
|Reviewed by Steve Ralph
|this is an excellent first poem Qamar, your friend Masarat Daud seems to have said it all very eloquently, thank you for sharing this...
|Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
JC xoxoxoxo PS. Masarat is a sweetie :)
|Reviewed by Cles Wilson
|Excellent writing. What a beautiful tribute to your Mom.
|Reviewed by Jane Flowers (Reader)
|Keep on writing. You have soul|
|Reviewed by deepa
|awwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooo sweet!!! luvely poem Qamar!!! that is soo sweet and keep on writing mr. poet! u have a talent in all these story writing/poetry stuff, good luck in all that you do... n God Blesssss.........
|Reviewed by Erum Abbasi
|Superb...I must say this is an excellent tribute to (OUR) MOTHER.
Your poem shows great love, passion and attachment with your mother.
I am proud of you and I appreciate Masrat Daud too, both of done great Job.
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
this is wonderful
true heart stuff enjoyed
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|excellent...your mother would have been so proud. :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) i look forward to more of your work, including poetry. :)|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|bravo, qamar!! you did absolutely super for your first attempt at writing poetry!! this is absolutely beautiful!! love, your friend, karen lynn. ((HUGS))|
|Reviewed by Silvia
|This was poignant...what a beautiful tribute to a mother. I have a son too and this touches me a lot. You have a lot of talent Qamar and you should tap it. I am glad your friends are helping you to do it. Excellent.|
|Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
|Qb, this is brilliant. Yes I mean it. I want you to believe in yourself and understand that poetry is only an art of expression. As a first attempt (or maybe second lolll)...this is much better than what many of us write. At least, it's much better than what I wrote! Keep it going. Just remember that...your poetry will be worth reading only if it's honest and honesty comes from your heart.
Looking forward to more of your written work - especially poems! Take care and oh yes - Excellent write.