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A Little Thank You To MOM
by Qamar A Abbasi

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Mother i miss you and I love you.
I have not forgotten the moment when you left
me behind to Godís refuge,
In a world no more than a stranger to me,
I had other people around me
to depend on and talk to,
They raised me after you
They loved me and spent time with me.
Taught me to make my own decisions.
Yet, at this stage of life, I still miss you
And treasure every moment
Yo ucould ever give me.
A special gift, that is etched on my soul forever;
Your motherly love.

Well, my first attempt at poetry. This poem is for my mother who gave birth to me and raised me and now since she is gone, I treasure each and every moment I have attached to her. I thank all of my family members who have been there for me when I needed them. I love them all.
PS. My friend Masrat Daud helped me write this poem. Thank you to you too.

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Reviewed by Hiren Shah 6/11/2003
Anything written on mother can only be an understatement. A very nice effort. Maybe you could look up Varanasi Rao(author)'s "The Mother"
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 2/16/2003
Love your write ! It touched me deeply
Reviewed by Steve Ralph 12/5/2002
this is an excellent first poem Qamar, your friend Masarat Daud seems to have said it all very eloquently, thank you for sharing this...
steve.
Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran 11/15/2002
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 8/29/2002
(((((((((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))))))

JC xoxoxoxo PS. Masarat is a sweetie :)
Reviewed by Cles Wilson 8/26/2002
Excellent writing. What a beautiful tribute to your Mom.

Reviewed by Jane Flowers (Reader) 8/26/2002
Keep on writing. You have soul
Reviewed by deepa 8/17/2002
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooo sweet!!! luvely poem Qamar!!! that is soo sweet and keep on writing mr. poet! u have a talent in all these story writing/poetry stuff, good luck in all that you do... n God Blesssss.........
luvz,
deepa
Reviewed by Erum Abbasi (Reader) 8/17/2002
Superb...I must say this is an excellent tribute to (OUR) MOTHER.
Your poem shows great love, passion and attachment with your mother.
I am proud of you and I appreciate Masrat Daud too, both of done great Job.
WELL DONE!!!
Reviewed by Josephine Bohen 8/14/2002
wow
this is wonderful
true heart stuff enjoyed
josie
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/14/2002
excellent...your mother would have been so proud. :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) i look forward to more of your work, including poetry. :)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/14/2002
bravo, qamar!! you did absolutely super for your first attempt at writing poetry!! this is absolutely beautiful!! love, your friend, karen lynn. ((HUGS))
Reviewed by Silvia 8/14/2002
This was poignant...what a beautiful tribute to a mother. I have a son too and this touches me a lot. You have a lot of talent Qamar and you should tap it. I am glad your friends are helping you to do it. Excellent.
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader) 8/14/2002
Qb, this is brilliant. Yes I mean it. I want you to believe in yourself and understand that poetry is only an art of expression. As a first attempt (or maybe second lolll)...this is much better than what many of us write. At least, it's much better than what I wrote! Keep it going. Just remember that...your poetry will be worth reading only if it's honest and honesty comes from your heart.

Looking forward to more of your written work - especially poems! Take care and oh yes - Excellent write.

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