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Haiku (5/7/5): Blossoms
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Sunday, September 28, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Image (c) 2008, Karla Dorman

delicate blossoms
of white against azure skies ---
vision of beauty

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (9/28)

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Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/1/2008
deep azure blue sky, no humidity there -- what a magnificent photo -- you captured the duplicate blossoms with perfection -- a spot on Haiku, too -- stay safe and happy -- JMW
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 10/1/2008
Your Haiku is a descriptive image of beauty. Love that gorgeous blue in the picture. Nicely done.
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 10/1/2008
A vision of beauty - words and picture.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/29/2008
I love haiku.

This is a beauty about beauty.

Thank you, Karla.

Love and best wishes,

Reviewed by Denise Edwards 9/29/2008
Indeed it is. Very nice, Karla.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 9/29/2008
I thought you were crying full of love for Autumn! but...blossoms, now? you are a very clever girl.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 9/28/2008
How beautiful with a sense of serenity....

Be always safe,
Reviewed by John Flanagan 9/28/2008
Karla, picture and word perfect.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 9/28/2008
Damn, girl, you are TOO GOOD with haiku...e
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/28/2008
Utterly exquisite, Karla!...ET
Reviewed by Rebecca Russell 9/28/2008
I can't add anything to what everyone has already said. It's beautiful! Rebecca
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 9/28/2008
Beautiful. Simply beautiful
Reviewed by Paul Berube 9/28/2008
Nice Karla.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 9/28/2008
A beautiful pic to go with your beautiful words karla. thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 9/28/2008
...delicate beauty to behold..awesome Karla!
Reviewed by Darryn Murphy 9/28/2008
nice job
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 9/28/2008
Picture perfect, Karla. -gene.
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 9/28/2008
Very lovely indeed,as the picture....Hugsss
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 9/28/2008
Beautiful Haiku, Karla!!! And a beautiful picture to match!!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 9/28/2008
This photo and your poem, really touches my visual mind and soul. Very nicely done...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines 9/28/2008
Karla, everybody else has already said it - it's beautiful :-)

But it is something else, as well. The haiku is an Eastern form and it does have rules which have nothing to do with the 5/7/5 structure. It is seldom that a Western person correctly does a haiku. The first two lines set elements of a scene or stage. The final line says something about that scene or stage. Karla, you have DONE it!!!

Ichi ban, tak san :-)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/28/2008
Dang, Karla~

Just posted this, and now you're up to three reviews!! Make it four: Mine! LOL Unless someone pops in before I get this in! LOL Very beautiful write and piccy; perfect combination!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/28/2008
Beautiful, Indeed!
Reviewed by Bonnie May 9/28/2008
Yes it is and this write has a beauty of its own. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/28/2008
Fantastic Ku and a sharp crisp image to complement it. Well done Karla...we need more of these from you.

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