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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
10/20/2008 |
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| I initially envisioned a James Dean, Nokia, in a high tech, high risk, spy game for Sprint -- and all along it was about a certain well known poet -- clever -- peace and love to you -- JMW |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/19/2008 |
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This explains everything! And I thought it was the cell [phone] that done it.
;-)
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/17/2008 |
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A unique poem with an original perspective. Way to imagine!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
10/16/2008 |
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Nice write, loved the flow...it was all good.l
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
10/16/2008 |
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| Definately a different type of poem!........CUTE.....M |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
10/15/2008 |
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Hello Eileen,
Your talent is endless . . . bravo!!
Best wishes,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/15/2008 |
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ET,
imaginative, creative and so self-effacing...and so well written.
John |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/15/2008 |
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| ... there's plenty of us around, too... perhaps we are a Virus?! :)) Free radicals, at any rate. Excellently scanned and rhymed, Eileen... but then, atomic division is like that, init?! However, we keep on taking the tablets... K xx |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
10/15/2008 |
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| That was a surprise write...very well done, blessings Holly |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/15/2008 |
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Another smile comes my way but let me tell you dear Eileen you are far from a wanna be poet, for you are excellent at what you write and share with us. Thank you.
Newfie hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/15/2008 |
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| Reminds me of the Ancient Ed Saga, and those good and evil twins - Edna and Edwina! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
10/15/2008 |
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| Gave me my morning grin, thanks...ed & Rufuz |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/15/2008 |
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Uhhhhhhhh, Eileen? Think you're waaaaaaaaaaay beyond the "wanna be" poet status ... it shows in this clever write! Would we that we all would be breakouts, rebel cells. We are, we're POETS! LOL Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/15/2008 |
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| cute write--enjoyed! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/15/2008 |
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Clever little Eileen; too cute!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/15/2008 |
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Naughty ET, you got me! hook, line and sinker, I wandered into a philoshophical world guided by your words and then wham! you clobbered me with a puch line, and it was a suckerpunch! ! !
Nice done girl!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
10/14/2008 |
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| Big smile here! Wonderful, Eileen. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
10/14/2008 |
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Hahaha!!!!! You've got me!!!!! For a moment I thought you were describing me!!!!! Okay, it's hard to control for I'm menopausal now!!!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
10/14/2008 |
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| LOL this is so cute and wonderful that you are so confident in your creativity that you can even poke fun at it. Great write and fun. Love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
10/14/2008 |
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| You are certainly not a wanna-be poet, that's for sure. This poem proves it, lol!! :) Love, Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
10/14/2008 |
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Lol you my friend are not a wannabe poet
You are a fantastic poetess
and your poetry is always brilliant!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
10/14/2008 |
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| Interesting write ET and very well presented. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/14/2008 |
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| screaming cells can certainly drive one to want to be a poet ;) |
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| Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines |
10/14/2008 |
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Ah, you are certainly no wannabe, Poet :-)
Love the way you slam-dunked the ending!!! You made me laugh!!!
I needed that.
Ted |
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