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Jail.break
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Monday, October 27, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Still feeling like ... well, wadded-up tissue, but THEY wanted to be heard. =]

Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman


They're in there.  "Let us out," they
scream, demanding to be released

from the claustrophobic confines of
my head.  They're beating on the
walls with their fists, making so much
racket until I give in:  their freedom.

That's all they wanted:  to fly onto the
page.  Who am I to hold them back?

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (10/27)

 

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Reviewed by 000 000 1/2/2009
Let em loose Karla!
For every-time you do, you write amazing stuff, along with the great photos...they are your cheerleaders!
Sunshine to you, CarolHawks
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 11/1/2008
I know the feeling Karla, Ive been feeling a bit wrung out myself
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Paul Berube 10/30/2008
lol Well said Karla. Get well soon my friend and may God bless.
Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry 10/28/2008
very fun karla

claustrophobic confines of my head

but your head must be a maze of venues for those fettered marks to play hide and seek

still, best to let them revel in sunshine

thanks, ~Donna.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/28/2008
And The Caged Bird Sings of Freedom!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 10/27/2008
How simply artful this piece is! The ability to say so much, yet so few words needed, I applaud you....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 10/27/2008
They win again! Yeah! Hugs:)
Sheila
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/27/2008
unique and wonderful writing Karla!
You have truly found your muse!

Love,
ET
Reviewed by jude forese 10/27/2008
it's difficult to retrain what demands to be free ...
Reviewed by Axilea MU 10/27/2008
Sweet and true, a nice perspective!
I really like the way you are looking at creativity
and showing it to your reader.

Axilea
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce 10/27/2008
Very creative indeed, Karla!!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/27/2008
That is the way of the poet...sort of a zen thing that must be practised all the time.

Fee
Reviewed by Sandra Corona 10/27/2008
I'm glad that your words and thoughts escaped :)! Cool!

Sandy
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 10/27/2008
Who indeed! And look what they've gone and done... called in all their friends from the heads of all the rest of us... the sound is positively DEAFENING!!!!!! :)) xx Hope you're feeling less bunged now that you've released the pressure a little. An excuse for yet another brandy... xx
Reviewed by richard cederberg 10/27/2008
Oh goodness ... that's a relief ... at first I thought you were talking about boogers. (-:
Richard
Reviewed by Rebecca Russell 10/27/2008
Bless you, Karla! You always bring a smile to my face. Great job despite the crud. Rebecca
Reviewed by Cryssa C 10/27/2008
such creativity! :~) You make me smile. Your imagery is superb.
Cryssa
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 10/27/2008
...oh Karla,, you are a hoot,, I hope they all break out,,, as you don't need them caged up!
:) don't forget that hot tea!
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 10/27/2008
Karla,

What a very unique twist on writing. You are so talented!

Mary
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 10/27/2008
Wooooooooow this blew me away, dear Karla. Fantastic write
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/27/2008
Karla~

Your words are screaming, "Let us OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWT!!" And you did, in fine fashion! EXCELLENT write, enjoyed! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D *Achooooooo* *Snif*
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 10/27/2008
Clauthophobic confines of your head? girl your thoughts most be enormous! ! ! as it should be from a so fine poet, don't blow them in your Kleenex.
Keep your head turn to Alaska, maybe you can pass it on to you know who.

Georg


Reviewed by Ed Matlack 10/27/2008
Let them blow out when you blow that nose...e
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 10/27/2008
Thank you, Karla. You did right. -gene.
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 10/27/2008
Karla,

That is such a great picture of you . . . you're so talented!!


Hugs and blessings,

Lance
Reviewed by Bonnie May 10/27/2008
Thank goodness you let them out to touch us all. You are somethin my friend, even sick you manage to give us a chuckle. Love and hugs and lots of prayers to get well. Love, Bonnie



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