|Reviewed by John Domino
|Supercharged, a poem to open eyes and enlighten ones senses.|
|Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson
|WOW,, What a masterpiece!..GREAT POEM!!!!!!M|
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
A scar, tiny and round
Some might call an inny
Where a cord of life
Once held her in place
In the sacrate security
Of a Goddess womb."
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|So astounding a write here, imaginination going strong, your fallen angel appeals to you in an extraordinary way. Good write and so fashionable for these days.|
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|A sensually mysterious treat of dark erotica! Outstanding, William!|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|....words that take one's breath away....stunning William. photo is picture perfect to compliment your poem!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|WOW! William,you are stoking up fires in the den,
but are you here to put them out;-)? Smoldering poem!
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|You are getting all the hens exited in the coop, like an horny fox on the prowl.............
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Incredible imagery and verse; a stunning combination! GREAT write, William; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Sensual descriptions. Nicely done!
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Passionate and sensual!|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Long Black Shinny hair, as the wings of a raven.. Raven's are curious birds, William, they are night creatures with mysterious eyes and passionate songs. This poem surely has gotten my blood boiling, you are one passionate, erotic man for sure...Of course I always knew you had this in you..
Much peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|William if women were spoken to in this manner there would be a lot of dark Fallen Angels. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Beautifully erotic poem William. So romantic.|
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Wow William such a beautiful sexual write. Bet the men are goin nuts...When you dream you really dream, no going for the ordinary and that's why your write is so spectacular, it is extraordinary. Love and hugs. Bonnie|
|Reviewed by Linda Law
|Truly sensual and erotic writing... lindalaw|
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|A dreamy write William...I love your choice of words in this one, very nice, Holly|
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|Sensuous, passionate and erotic! Well done!, Poetry Man! HUGS! SC|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
This is GORGEOUS tempatation. :) No mortal will be able to resist her wiles. :) Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.