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I asked the Universe!
by Jeanette Foresta

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I asked the universe for a house by the sea

with a white balcony

and a man just for me

we can sit and have some tea

just him and me

on my terrace

by the sea.

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Reviewed by Heather Bricklin (Reader)
Simple things are often the most beautiful. The visual effects are perfect for the poem.
Reviewed by richard poor
well, i liked it,but ya know,i think you could have used this for a greater jumpin board....still,it got me in such few words!
Reviewed by Russ Okamura
What a beautiful prose, makes me wish I had a ship I could sail by your terrace to see your beautiful house by the sea!
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
ahh...how lovely...hope you get it all! :)
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Yes, let's have some tea and some vodka shots as well. :) Good one, Jeanette.
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Hope you get it soon.. ;)
Reviewed by Lori Moore
This is a wonderful write... and a very good lesson for us all... or at least for me.
Reviewed by jude forese
hope your reply is divine ;)(love your hat)
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
8-19-02

But, Alas It Gave You a House By a Tree...

TRASK
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Wonderful creativity...love the animation and your picture slide show!

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