Raindrops Had To Fall
by Amber V Moonstone
Saturday, December 06, 2008
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"Raindrops Had To Fall" (C)
by Amber "V" Moonstone 5/04/07
Another drop of rain,
Another flinch of pain,
while tumbling among the fields
of a wish and a hope that yields;
fond memories of love gone by
and steadfast honor to comply,
with the new journey undertaken,
no soul is forsaken.
Once the raindrops begin to dry,
the pain will then begin to die.
Wishing and hoping are not in vain
but seeing and knowing will explain
why the raindrops had to fall
and the pain was felt by all.
Begin again, once more,
and know that wisdom is at the door.
Life is meant to enjoy,
Misery is meant to employ
Awakening drops of raining pain,
acknowledging that it was not in vain!
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Author's Notes: Pain is like raindrops on an icy morning. You need it to wake up! To all of those, who have suffered a lost love, remember, all that you have gained from it, and move forward, toward another rain!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V" Moonstone
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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Your heart is a treasured gem Amber (Viv)
Hope is screaming out! HOPE IS ABOUT!
Let it rain for when it dries, their is no reason to cry!
Love your Poem!
Warmest Blessings in Poetry and Love, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
|Reviewed by A PAX
|I love your voice here, and spirit :)
this is my first time......(I think?) reading you.......
I will be back for more :) pax A
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|A great well done poem with a hidden gem: "Life is meant to enjoy,
Misery is meant to employ" - So let's get going and turn our rain-showers into new spring flowers of good work - And you did!
Glad I read this one...
|Reviewed by jude forese
|beautiful wisdom ...|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|very beautiful Amber...A tear is full of so much more than a drop of rain...
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Every lost one left a void too great to be filled just with hope.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Lovely work, Amber. I especially like your last few lines.|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i like the feel of this and that it inspired the thought that each love that doesn't work out is still a gift or a gem in our lives|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|You are so right for with each love lost we move closer to find the one and only true love.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wisdom beautifully wrapped in a poem of excellence!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A outstanding write Amber
You never fail to offer nothing other then your best
Thank You For sharing this write
Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Amazing, expressive write
"Awakening drops of raining pain,
acknowledging that it was not in vain!"
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|So true, Amber, excellent piece. Loved it!|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|A beautiful poem, Amber. That last sentence says it all. We learn from all that happens to us. It makes us stronger and more knowledgable to deal with future problems. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Hi Amber,this is an amazing poem you have written with a very profound message that people should use and take into consideration.Take care of yourself :-)