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A Taste Of Rosa's Pain
by Southern Comfort

Monday, December 08, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Rosa just wanted to be loved and held dear. She just wanted a little tenderness.

Rosa was an aged beauty,
She walked in grace as she carried out her daily household duties.
She kept house for an ungratful son and a soured man.
The warmth that graced the abode was rendered from Rosa's gentle hand.
She gave her best from day to day,
Never with any thanks given, no one had anything nice to say.
The men in her life had always been given the best,
They did not realize that other men were given much less.
Rosa always hoped for kindness, but none ever came,
Day after weary day, it was always the same.
As Rosa created her savory spaghetti sauce, her heartbroken tears fell into the brew,
Her life was a tragic mess and that realization made her sad and blue.
Rosa's sauce was a delight, it was simmered slowly, a true dining pleasure,
While Rosa was daily ignored, when she should been valued like a treasure.
Rosa's heartbroken tears, was the secret in the sauce,
You got a taste of Rosa's pain, as over the pasta it was tossed.
Rosa, an earthy Angel, had the patience of Job,
She dreamed her sad little dereams, while she was a slave to the stove.
If you ever get a chance to sample Rosa's sauce and dine at her place,
Say something nice about the sauce and watch a smile adorn her lovely face.
An Angel's tears and sadness grace the sauce,
Give her a little praise and tenderness, for her self-esteem is at a loss.

MUSIC: THE ROSE


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Reviewed by Mandisa Hlatshwayo (Reader) 2/4/2009
That is just deep and I'm touched.
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 12/11/2008
SOooooooooooooooo exceptional SC. I miss you already my dearest newfound friend. This is beautifil!!!!!!!!! Love you from the bottom of my heart...I will be back right after Chritmas.... meanwhile keep writing the powerful, beautiful words that you write and so lovingly from that big heart of yours! love Holly xoxoxoxox
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 12/9/2008
Oh how bittersweet and emotional this story is. For one to feel so trapped as this lovely lady does just breaks my heart...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by William Bonilla 12/9/2008
a beautiful write S C
lots of emotions within
I would like to taste her cooking myself
Maybe if shell roast one of those two "Pigs"
Now one will ever know the difference.....
and compliment her with grace
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 12/9/2008
Dear SC,

Great emotional depth to this poem, and you have penned it so superbly!!


Hugs,

Lance
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 12/9/2008
SC you just tore at my heart strings with this one as I know the words were pulled from deep within your heart. Thank you for the music, one of my favorites.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh 12/9/2008
Very sad, very very sad. Unfortunately I could not read the other pieces about rape, it haunts me for months. I make it a habit to never watch movies with scenes of rape.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 12/9/2008
Sometimes we can't find the words to describe something angelical, you, with this one...did it!
One of your very best, send it to a few women magazines, i am sure that it will touch a few hearts.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 12/9/2008
You've touched the heart with this.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/8/2008
You captured the essence and soul of your character here and made her a friend we would all like to know. Well done SC.
hugs
fee
Reviewed by 000 000 12/8/2008
Extremely clever writing. This is so beautiful and we each have a secret ingredient. But who would have thought..hers would be a tear.

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