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Angels Beneath The Breeze
by A PAX

Tuesday, December 09, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Angels are bright still, though the brightest fell- William Shakespeare

Angels Beneath The Breeze

Those graced with wings are many
And varied as the score
Yet by a prismed difference
They're joined by right to soar
From tiniest of insects
To dragons old of myth
We mortals dream with envy
To rise in flight there with
Wings outstretched of sparrows
The locusts in the skies
Flying fish of oceans
From earth and sea they fly
Mortal aviation,
The craft of man to air
A miracle with limit
To trust a wing with prayer
Perhaps some fallen angels
Might still possess their gift
Where by sweet temptations
Would offer souls a lift
Banished from the heavens
For the sins of pride
Beware mortals, shun envy
Decline their offered rides
Our choices marked with wisdom
Our choices greased by ease
Are we the fallen angels
To never ride the breeze


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Reviewed by Sheila Roy 12/17/2008
A deep message within these lines. Beautifully written. The last stanza leaves me with a feeling of regret and longing for what could be if the right choices are made. Love and Hugs,
Reviewed by Michelle Mead 12/11/2008
This is cool-the last poem I read was perfectly written, so was this, i really love this.
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 12/10/2008
A PAX, beautifully written. I like the rhythm and envy
your skill with rhyme. If I had the wings of an angel,
so goes the old song, where would I fly to, and would
I find a good hotel when I got there? -gene.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 12/10/2008
By the end of this century, we'll all fly with ease. Until then, we dream of angels..

Reviewed by Paul Berube 12/10/2008

Your such a pleasure to read. You sure do get your point across. Peace, Love, Blessings & Friendship Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/10/2008
Have to ditto Mr. Ed on this one!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/10/2008
Are we the fallen angels
To never ride the breeze?

It sure seems that way these days, Queenie.

Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/10/2008
I love this one refreshing and insightful.
Reviewed by jude forese 12/9/2008
"all the devils are really angels want to set you free"

nicely done ...
Reviewed by Kenny Baez 12/9/2008
Beautiful poem capturing the hold angels have over humankind's imagination. Hope I get to meet my guardian angel some day! :-)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/9/2008
Splendid poem A Pax! methinks we are not the fallen angels,
since I've ridden the thermals already;-)

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 12/9/2008
interesting introspection
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 12/9/2008
Questions to confront all humanity and well said...

Be always safe,

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