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Den- sity
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Thursday, December 11, 2008
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Thick jungle, at least from my perspective.

The atmosphere around here
could be cut with a butter knife
then spread on a piece of toast
so figure your flavor the most
There's no need for suspense
in a place so dense
At times it would probably be nice to
have a good offense and defense

I'm one of the rough riders 
galloping  through
got stuck and at first didn't know
what to do
I'm not armed with a perfect attitude
at times I can get kind of rude
Neither am I a perfectionist in verse
however I try to stay away from worse
but I know I have the curse

This den can put a poet in a trick
the atmosphere is so darn thick
Even the stone throwers would
need a strong throw
a boulder wouldn't even go
It would bouce off the density
become confused in the intensity
but there is a chance for propensity




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Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 12/20/2008
I hear ya loud and clear,take care

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 12/16/2008
The truth for sure, love ya, Holly
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 12/11/2008
I hear ya, here...(stay dry) Ed
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