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Carly Frost

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Fallen Stars.
by Carly Frost

Monday, December 29, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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This is sort of, a response type poem, to the song Naked By The Computer. It's also for a friend of mine.


Also, a friend helped me with it, but they did not want thier name mentioned.
Modest mouse. :)



 

Meteor showers commence, and you breach beneath the spark show
can I only watch in turmoil as you writhe in agony?

Darling, the constellation above you,
has reached the peak of evanesce

Dismal and black,
the night sky has left you feeble in the dark

Your aphotic surroundings,
have stranded you without vision

But still so definite to me, even in this twilight
I can see your twisted contour

Obscure desperation,
in my ambition to void you of your pain

If only I could convey the heavens, bring them down to you
and set ablaze your night sky

If only I could shed some luminosity,
onto your darkened heart.

 


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/10/2009
I truly feel that I can relate to what you have expressed via your verses here, Carly. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 12/31/2008
So well penned and just earthy enough to inspire the reader to enjoy the mistic quality of the poem. Jude would enjoy this one.
Reviewed by Michelle Mead 12/30/2008
Love those last four lines, good work.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 12/29/2008
One reaching out to soothe another, how genuinely passionate...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 12/29/2008
A caring plea. Perhaps not returned?

Ron
Reviewed by Aberjhani 12/29/2008
Enjoyed the musicality and the inspired imagery of these lines.

Aberjhani
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