|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|I like the lyrical rhythm here. Fantastic lines, Michelle!
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|S u p e r b !|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Such a beautiful melancholic yet soothing piece, just great!
'if only for a chance to love you to my detriment'
Wow, love that line and love this work, masterful.
I checked out the artist you mentioned, awesome stuff!
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Michelle, the flow of your poem reminds me of a beautiful song popularized by singer Ed Ames in the 1960's, Time, Time -- "the summer was golden,their love young and new, his bold arms her rendezvous" -- one of my all time favorite,pop songs -- a very beautiful poem of romance -- may love and peace be yours this day -- JMW|
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
You have expressed your love and the sad feelings so well with this poem. This is superbly written.
Happy New Year to you!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|Forecast: pain and sorrow
Outlook: there's tomorrow
Can one love someone unconditional?
Be honest; be rational; be radical . . . . .
Be taken advantaged of - Be used - Abused.
Which cheek stings worse - the second or the first.
What poetry! Always Exceptional and I "unconditionally' love to read.
|Reviewed by J. Pajot
|A very nice way of expressing that "love hurts"...
Best of all things to you, now and throught the coming year,
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|A very lovely write!!!!
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Your Love Is Tenderly Beautiful
Your Heart Sings in the bounty of "Unconditional"
Lovely Soothing Poem Michelle
Peace, Love & Poetry
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|Wonderful poetry~have a happy new year|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|Great metaphors and an enjoyable read. Blessings to you.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Fabulous final strophe, Michelle, and I love the rarified atmosphere you create: clean lines with their seamless fusion of concrete images and glistening concepts. Delicate but strong. A very happy new year to you. Kate xx|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Michelle, this poem is beautiful and a joy to read.
Cheers and happy New Year!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Beautifully penned Michelle and soul touching poetry.|
|Reviewed by B Wise (Reader)
|I really love this. Great feeling deeply expressed and it resonated.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|As usual you give us the best Michelle. Thank you for sharing. Happy New Year to you and yours.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A chill intrigue. What will the melting snow show?
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|The metaphors of art to live and live to art are captured in this for the greatest inspiration for most writers and artists is that of affairs of the heart. To be able to combine the passion, highs and lows, rights and wrongs and ups and downs of love into the painting of an artist is magic. Very well done Michelle.
|Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre
|Very moving interpretation, indeed. I love your panoramic word-tapestries!!!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
One feels the chill in the imagery of having been hurt in these lines, and yet, there is hope: the gentle sunshine of true agape love. Well done!
((((HUGS)))) and love, and Happy New Year!, Karla.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
Of the vision before you
Thanks for sharing
Love & peace be with you and your family
Wishing you all A Happy New Year