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A Feeling of Solace
by A Serviceable Villain

Wednesday, January 07, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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'silhouettes of all my loved ones from the past were inside . . . '


Down the road less traveled

There is a place with a million

steps that are worn away -  I

decided to venture; at the top

I walked down a cobblestone

street . . .

 

I came up to an old wooden door

That when opened turned into a

daguerreotype stained in black

and gray – silhouettes of all my

loved ones from the  past were

inside . . .

 

Hundreds of years of dust tried

To cover all memories – the walls

echoed their voices that were once

heard; mirrors still reflected the light

from smiling faces; I began to feel their

presence . . .

 

Then aging voices whispered to me

The way things use to be – they were

no longer strangers; took me back to a

special time, it was now in my heart; and

if I ever lost my way, just close my eyes and

dream . . .

 

Their footsteps were no longer heard

But were now frozen in time – as I got

ready to leave, a feeling of solace took

me back one last time to a place that

seemed so familiar; a part of them was with

me . . .

 

‘2009’ RLS

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/16/2009
A heartfelt offering Lance...a little spooky too... feelings of sadness pierced my heart!!

Love tinka
Reviewed by Shay White 1/15/2009
To journey through the window of the ancient past through a beautiful poem, doesn't get much better than that! Thanks for sharing! Shay
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 1/10/2009
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello 1/8/2009
Hello Lance,

Beautiful with a tinge of sadness. "There are places I'll remember all my life though some have changed, some forever not for better, some have gone and some remain...all these places had their moments, with people and things that went before...but of all these friends and lovers...in my life I loved you more."

Beatles, definitely-
Cynthia
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 1/7/2009
There is much peace to this Lance...to have your own moment with loved ones that never left your heart,, truly heartfelt.
love,
Christine
Reviewed by 000 000 1/7/2009
Your picturesque words and this writing enables feelings from the past to flood my heart as I remember. Captured only in your special way...our loved ones whom live in our hearts. BEAUTIFUL!!!!
CarolHawks
Reviewed by Linda Hill 1/7/2009
Lance,
I went back not long ago to one of the houses I lived in as a child. Oh , how different it all was...but I could still hear the long ago footsteps of my siblings running thru the halls, the echos of our laughter as we played, The halls were silent, no one lived there anymore, hadn't for years. Thanks for taking me back in time to a better day when things were simplier and life was easier.

Love an huggss,
~Linda
Reviewed by Aberjhani 1/7/2009
As visual and emotonally moving as a powerful short film. The reader can journey with the narrator through the enigmatic physical environment as well as through the interiors of his spiritual reflections.

Aberjhani
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/7/2009
A marvelous poem, and I often travel down that very same road. May they always remain in our hearts.
Reviewed by Bonnie May 1/7/2009
Oh Lance this is so absolutely beautiful and touching. You took me back in time too with this AWESOME write. Only you could have explained it this way, I know, for I have tried. Love and hugs, Bonnie



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