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A little girl Revisited
by Georg E Mateos

Tuesday, January 20, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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There was once upon a time a Little Red Riding Hood and the wolf (everyone is mouth bashing him, he was only hungry!) but here the wolf part is done by Daddy.

A little girl had a puppy dog
which she loved very much,
and a drunken, beating father
that didn’t want the dog
around the house.
The little girl was at school
when the puppy dog ran away,
to live forever in a farm
her father said.

A little girl had a pussycat
which she loved very much,
and also an angry father
that didn’t wanted pussycat
around the house.
The little girl was at school
when also the cat one day,
went to live in a farm
her father said.

A little girl had a doll
which she loved very much,
it could say “mamma, mamma”
but never uttered one “dad”
around the house.
The little girl was at school
when her doll went her way,
to live forever in a farm
her father said.

A little girl had a father
which she didn’t liked very much,
he never said I love you
he was that kind of man.
The little girl was at school
when police asked for her dad;
with a mischievous smile
the little girl informed them
that he went to live forever…
in a farm, she said.

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Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 2/4/2009
oh I have Jeepers Creepers Chills scrolling along my body
and out of the mouths of babes-they also learn

I am thankful for love...
Reviewed by jude forese 1/22/2009
i like the clever element of this poem, compelling the reader to consider the innuendo of an abusive father ... he certainly must have been more than just an angry man ...
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 1/22/2009
OH My this is haunting...goose bumps
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 1/22/2009
very nice and touching
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 1/22/2009
VERY, VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Diana Wiles 1/21/2009
A modern day fairytale...these are such an important part of life...
Chilling...because it is modern...!

Bwst wishes, Diana.
Reviewed by Cryssa C 1/21/2009
gives me shivers...
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten 1/21/2009
Gives me the willies!
Somehow, your flow in this, forced me to stop and vision them both...her pets, her doll, her mama...Sad, ya made me feel, Georg...because, this does happen!
I also thought of a poem I wrote, sorta similar..."Back to Dead",
I had to put a funny edge to it, just to keep my head elsewhere. Horrid!

But a great pen, once again! :)
Love and Peace~
Reviewed by 000 000 1/20/2009
A very well planned story...and the ending was excellent!!!!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 1/20/2009
You do have a way of provoking sad memories, though this at least had a somewhat happy ending. You hold so much love in your heart still, to share with the world. God bless....

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 1/20/2009
That was what he deserved, George.
Reviewed by richard cederberg 1/20/2009
If he would have just had a revelation of love and respect and caring and nurturing, perhaps things would have turned out differently for this cad. Oh the satire of it. The difference between what might be expected and what actually came to pass leaves this reader more than satisfied.
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 1/20/2009
A tragic story with an unique twist at the end...well done, Georg
peace and love, Carole~
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/20/2009
He got what he deserved, Georg. A fine way to retell the classic tale. Thank you. Love and peace,

Reviewed by George Carroll 1/20/2009
Pure irony that almost wants you to clap approval if it weren't so tragic.
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 1/20/2009
There is tragic comedy here that makes your writing so humanly great.As always I feel your heart and soul here.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/20/2009
Love it and the irony of it.

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 1/20/2009
A funny farm I bet! Bless you! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Art Sun 1/20/2009
Georg your talent is one which holds nothing back even if the message is one which holds the message between the lines...

nice work...

Art Sun...
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 1/20/2009
I felt that ending coming or something like less abusive, unloving father to deal with...ed
Reviewed by Bonnie May 1/20/2009
OH, never did I expect the cruel a man is to destroy the loves of his child. How sad a write Georg but for it ripped at my heart. Your words were so vivid and truely Superb. Love and hugs, Bonnie
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/20/2009
Quite a sobering ending, brother; and quite a sad tale.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 1/20/2009
Oh, my - a twist I wasn't expecting! Chillingly effective and so sad, Georg, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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