|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|oh I have Jeepers Creepers Chills scrolling along my body
and out of the mouths of babes-they also learn
I am thankful for love...
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i like the clever element of this poem, compelling the reader to consider the innuendo of an abusive father ... he certainly must have been more than just an angry man ...|
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|OH My this is haunting...goose bumps|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|very nice and touching|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY, VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|A modern day fairytale...these are such an important part of life...
Chilling...because it is modern...!
Bwst wishes, Diana.
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|gives me shivers...
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|Gives me the willies!
Somehow, your flow in this, forced me to stop and vision them both...her pets, her doll, her mama...Sad, ya made me feel, Georg...because, this does happen!
I also thought of a poem I wrote, sorta similar..."Back to Dead",
I had to put a funny edge to it, just to keep my head elsewhere. Horrid!
But a great pen, once again! :)
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by 000 000
|A very well planned story...and the ending was excellent!!!!|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|You do have a way of provoking sad memories, though this at least had a somewhat happy ending. You hold so much love in your heart still, to share with the world. God bless....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|That was what he deserved, George.|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|If he would have just had a revelation of love and respect and caring and nurturing, perhaps things would have turned out differently for this cad. Oh the satire of it. The difference between what might be expected and what actually came to pass leaves this reader more than satisfied.|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A tragic story with an unique twist at the end...well done, Georg
peace and love, Carole~
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|He got what he deserved, Georg. A fine way to retell the classic tale. Thank you. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Pure irony that almost wants you to clap approval if it weren't so tragic.|
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|There is tragic comedy here that makes your writing so humanly great.As always I feel your heart and soul here.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Love it and the irony of it.
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|A funny farm I bet! Bless you! Jasmin Horst|
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Georg your talent is one which holds nothing back even if the message is one which holds the message between the lines...
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I felt that ending coming or something like it...one less abusive, unloving father to deal with...ed|
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|OH, never did I expect the ending...how cruel a man is to destroy the loves of his child. How sad a write Georg but for it ripped at my heart. Your words were so vivid and truely Superb. Love and hugs, Bonnie|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite a sobering ending, brother; and quite a sad tale.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Oh, my - a twist I wasn't expecting! Chillingly effective and so sad, Georg, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.