|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|YOU CAUGHT IT!...BEFORE THE SPOIL...AND YOUR PHRASES 'PAINT' SO LOVELY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Some things don't last long, and yet they seem to be there to remind us that things can be different, pure, worth looking at...
I like that "hallowed layer of white", quite meditative.
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|A lovely write!!
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|I love the closing lines especially, Dawn. Makes me want to pull on my boots and go stomping... and for real!! It is ACTUALLY JUST like this where I am right now, lucky me! Fabulous peek through your windows of heart, mind and soul. And great view! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|Very visual poem. No fleeting moment escapes your notice. Tnank for sharing this wonderful poem.
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Wonderful title followed by wise and eloquent words in observance of and in appreciation for granduer.|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Beautiful poem, Dawn! 'It drifts' here this
morning and I have been reminded... love that
last stanza, the entire work is excellent.
Great message in such simplicity.
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Nice thoughts Dawn...the whiteness of snow can penetrate the emotions of a heart filled with the need to absorb its calmness and its magnificence...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|This is absolutely beautiful,I enjoy reading it,take care
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
This one is AWESOME!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|it renews and sooths the mind
even though for a few moments
peace be with you
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Great photo . . . beautiful penning - wonderful flow to this write!!
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Snowfall through a gifted writer's eyes. Fantastic poem:)
|Reviewed by 000 000
|Crisp and clean. A wonderful writing!|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
your first stanza washed over me like water. So articulate and unpretentious. Wonderful thoughts here that expose the gentleness in your heart and the unique way that you percieve a magical season.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|We are so lucky to have Mother nature paint us such beautiful pictures. Thank you for sharing Dawn.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Absolutely delightful. Thank you, J'nia|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|What a beautiful message Dawn...and your words dance ever so lightly.
|Reviewed by Carin Spirit
|Dawn - you have captured the breath of winter,'on snowy winter mornings.'. I love this write, it is soft yet crisp and clean.
Thank you for sharing. Warmth, Carin'
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Thanks you, Dawn. What a delight to see the snowfall through
your eyes and your talented words. -gene.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Love it. Bravo. Liz|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Blessed are the eyes of the poet. thanks dear Dawn|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Dawn! What an exceptionally well expressed poem! I love it! Thanks.|
|Reviewed by L Hippler
|You captured that magic of a first snowfall, Dawn.|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|I love the hushed silence that winter's snowfall brings. I don't know what it is about it that brings that special feeling, but I am grateful that every now and then the world is "cleansed" with it...
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Very deep and beautiful verse.|
|Reviewed by David Hightower
|Dawn - Love the title. You have captured not only the beauty of this passing moment, you've also honored those who see beyond the moment:
a reminder has been left…
for those eyes which do more than
glimpse through kitchen windows
on snowy winter mornings.
|Reviewed by Stan Law (aka Stanislaw Kapuscinski)
|Gentle as the down of a freshly hatched chick,
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|This is so written so beautifully for we can see it through your eyes. Well done Dawn. Love and hugs, Bonnie|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A lovely winter's ode, Dawn.|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|Nicely done, Dawn. My niece lives in Colorado and has sent me pictures of a snowed-over landscape that are breathtaking.
Th following lines describe its purity very well:
"For a few fleeting moments,
the earth lay clean, unspoiled,"
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Exquisite, Dawn, a beautiful write of serenity. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I know this feeling well, for it is the same thought I always have after a snowfall...how purified the earth seems and fresh and clean...then along comes that darn snowplow. Sometimes I wish we could just shut the roads down for like a few days and just enjoy it without the mess that we tend to make of it.
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|You write so well of nature's beauty and its gift to us... who have that keen eye and appreciative spirit. Sweet reading! - Bill|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Ah the smell of home cooked pies is what I thought of when I read this poem.|