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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
1/29/2009 |
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| A portrait of life as the the tides ebb back and forth through years of time. Well said Theresa!........M |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
1/29/2009 |
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Life...friends, love, companionship, tenderness, care, smiles, caresses, poetry, hugs...if only life could contain only them...
A touching poem!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
1/28/2009 |
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Thank you for sharing Theresa, pure life.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Layman |
1/28/2009 |
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Beautifully written my dear friend! The point well taken, at this time for me personally.
Love and hugs; Sherry
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/28/2009 |
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Very strong statement made in this song of life that you have penned. Glad to hear you are feeling better and recuperating.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
1/28/2009 |
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| Life it is! all the joy, all the sorrow--life, so well said |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/28/2009 |
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A meaningful write, Theresa; I appreciate you philosophical perspective. It makes sense to me. Love and blessings to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
1/28/2009 |
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You've touched the pulse of life with this poem. Sometimes life feels like an obstacle course, but one thing I've learned from my many years of experience is that if we are goal centered and strive to tackle those problems along life's way, then we become stronger by our effort and more able to deal with the next set of problems. However, we can only do it for ourselves and not for others....
Your last line is a wise statement: "So sad as everyone must learn on their own." Children demand independence before they have the knowledge and intellect to handle responsibility. They seem determined to rush out into the world like explorers, then they stumble and fall, and get up and do it again, and we can only pray they learn from their mistakes.
Good write, Theresa.
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/28/2009 |
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Moving write my friend!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
1/28/2009 |
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| Oh Theresa this is so beautifully heart touching...What a lovely write of understanding and wise on how you live it. Well done sweet friend, well done. Love and hugs, Bonnie |
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