|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|You sound like a pirate here. I really enjoyed the style of this write. So nicely done Fee
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
I love the classic tone here. Bravo:) A masterpiece! Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|This is such an EXCELLENT dark poem SWEET FEE!
I enjoyed reading it twice
your heart was truly in flight....
Such emotive expressions found deeply hidden!Love the picture that spewed these words on too!
"The Bards Final Church Service" is truly remarkable! As you continue looking forward...Even in the eerie walls of time...
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
love these taunting webs hidden in the corners of your pen Fee!!!
I Am A Lover Of These Types Of Poems As You Know
So....Down further we venture upon each stair step leading us with your wonderful verses into those darkled halls of "the bard's final church service"
Much Love & Inspirations
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|cool...like the style|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
Sounds like witches prayer....lol
Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Very nice, Fee, great tribute to the bard|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|What an imagination you have Cuz, if only I could write like you. This is great. Thank you for sharing.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Powerful and excellent poem,very intriguing,take care
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite powerful, and quite a powerful graphic, my friend.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Oh Yorik! if you could talk...heck! ! ! I prefer you don't!
Nice done Fee.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|I love the "feel" of the verse...and the photo suits it perfectly!|
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Fee this has the hint of the Bard himself.
The flow sets the erie mood with well chosen wording.
Great thought in this one methinks.
Beware the Ides.........
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|your pentameter rings loudly of the famous bard of old. Excellent. J'nia|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|The Bard would be proud, Fee ... each word carefully chosen for full effectiveness in painting this dark portrait of "the end". Perfect language ... the grim, deathly emotion is palpable. Super write! Hugs, Lizzie|
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|Yes, i can feel a classically gothic mood to this that matches well the picture. I am always impressed by the way you can write whatever style you wish to, really really well. :) Michelle|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Brilliant. Beyond brilliant. And creepy too. Love it. Liz|
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Splendid as is your forte for the dark side.|
|Reviewed by Linda Law
|Altho I generally avoid dark topics, (just a personal thing/reasons) I do enjoy good writing! You my friend, have a way with words, and storytelling... good write. hugs, lindalaw|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|I so enjoy the way you write Fee, even your darker ones.
|Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
|That's very stark, my friend. I do like it, reminds me of Stephen King. I also like the font. I'm not sure if you used this one before. Great job! Missed ya.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Hauntingly penned, Fee, my favorite line is,
"...lay dormant the beads of mother's rosary
worn smooth from prayers forgot...." WOW Powerful! Heartbreaking!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|FASINATING WRITE FEE....A TRUE GEM...I AGREE, BETTER THAN SHAKESPEARE FOR I COULD SEE IT IN THIS WRITE BUT NEVER COULD IN HIS...LOVE AND HUGS, BONNIE|
|Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines
|I cannot say why, but I LOVE that title, Fee. And the poem? This is better than Shakespeare or Dante or Petrarch. By comparison, their lines and images were stilted and somehow out of reach, while your verse easily reaches me, right now, today. This one is so excellent Fee. Marcia will love it, and you might send her the pic, as well.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i love the atmosphere and feel to this--perfect word choices|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|This poem has such a goth feel to it. But deeply interwoven is a lost soul fearful of what is coming. Needing spring to bloom in his heart to feel alive once again.
Just what I was feeling from this poem.
Very deeply written and the picture that inspired this poem is quite amazing!
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Weird thoughts on a Sunday morn...hope you went to church and to God confessed your sins...e ;-)|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|We'll never know where our muse gets its inspirations from, but this is a good one. EXCELLENT write, Fee!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Total gloom, remorse and bitterness of soul... now I need to read something UPlifting. Still, the work itself is enviably expressed with fascinating word pictures. Poor vacant skull, did you not know there was hope offered freely in Jesus?