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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
3/24/2009 |
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Love the first and second stanzas! Makes me want to come along with you!!
Cryssa :~) |
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| Reviewed by Juliet Waldron |
3/17/2009 |
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| Oh, I love "shampoo my cares away..."! If you can't be warm, then the next best thing is a lovely warm poem. :) (()) |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
3/15/2009 |
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| must be the Gulf of Mexico Karla -- a photograph to bring back memories of summer weather -- your poem is so relaxing, yet invigorating with promise -- peace and love to you -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
3/14/2009 |
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| Great images ,picture and poem. A good way to take a trip! It costs nothing!......M |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
3/14/2009 |
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I can practically feel the sun. Love the creative description in verse 1. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by David Young |
3/13/2009 |
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| Your imagination had me there enjoying your Uni-Verse. |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
3/13/2009 |
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Karla, you had me worried, for us baby boomers "tripping" has a whole different meaning. However, I enjoyed this very much. I have moved back to South Florida, but I still never go in the water. Just sit and watch it.
Bobbi |
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| Reviewed by 000 000 |
3/13/2009 |
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Sounds like you are having one big free sauna party...if only in your mind!
I'll meet ya there! Cute poem! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/13/2009 |
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This is a great antidote to what I just posted, Karla. Truly a relief and a joy. Thank you. Amour et paix, ton ami de la C-B, Canada,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
3/13/2009 |
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| Beautiful writing indeed...would love to be there with you sweet lady..enjoy...stay safe and well..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/13/2009 |
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| Wanna come along on our cruise down to the Keys when old Matlack fixes up that old wooden boat??!! |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
3/13/2009 |
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Only if we can go skinny-dipping ! ! ! :-) LOL
Georg
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| Reviewed by Nicky Goodman |
3/13/2009 |
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| omgoodnessme -this poem gave me pangs! i must close my eyes -see you there! xx |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
3/12/2009 |
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Karla, I'd love to enter your imagination with you
and share the warmth and wavesong of your special beach.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines |
3/12/2009 |
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Yeppers, temp standing at a steady 36 here for the last 24 hours, like it got stuck or something. Where is that balmy beach? Need some of that :-)
Ted |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/12/2009 |
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Beautiful write and you wouldn't have to twist my arm to leave the snow and ice of the cold outside to go to your beach instead.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
3/12/2009 |
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I always love the beach. It's soothing and relaxing. Good write, Karla!!!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
3/12/2009 |
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sitting on the beach, the
breeze parts my hair into
sections, so the sun can
shampoo my cares away.
what great pictures you paint.....Imagination is sometimes even better! |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
3/12/2009 |
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Karla you never cease to amaze me. Only the StormSpinner could write a stanza such as:
sitting on the beach, the
breeze parts my hair into
sections, so the sun can
shampoo my cares away.
I'm of the opinion that you're amongs the best of today's poets. Keep writing my friend and I'll keep enjoying the genius of your pen.
Hugs from sunny California,
Marcia |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
3/12/2009 |
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| love love love the ocean,, and miss it terribly! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
3/12/2009 |
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| Clear water, certainly isn't NJ...such a nice place to dream of though...(can I come too? Rufuz) & Ed |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
3/12/2009 |
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You need to come to Cali so we can take you the beach and not only in your imagination LOL! Keep these coming and be blessed
In Christs Love
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/12/2009 |
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Oh "sigh" how I miss the ocean and this is just a lovely reminder...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
3/12/2009 |
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Karla,
As always your touch is sure and here it's delicate, too; "so the sun can shampoo my cares away"...lovely lovely image.
John |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
3/12/2009 |
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| Imaginary or not, it was a great trip to the seashore...love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/12/2009 |
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I think if you get any more relaxed, you'll slip into a coma! LOL Ohhh, this one is relaxing on a rainy, cold spring Texas evening! Very well penned/illustrated; brava!
Next time you go cruisin', I'm with you! LOL (Was this trip really necessary?? LOLOLOL)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
3/12/2009 |
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| LOL That's just great. Made me want to join you. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle |
3/12/2009 |
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Oh Karla, it sounds beautiful! I am there!!Love this.
With Love,
Cindy |
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