|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Like your rythme and tempo in "End Results"
It would be nice if people would think of the
"End Results" before they even start.
As always great write with a profound message.
All the best,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|in the end, your forgiveness was a gift to yourself-well done|
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Great that you forgave you dad, 'cause now he cant control you or your life. Your poem speaks a lot for all of us, Grady.
Blessings and Love - Micke
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Powerful write, Gem; well penned! And if you can't forgive those who have wronged you, why should God forgive YOU?? Something to think about; in fact, that was the sermon today at church: our Pastor talked about this very thing; I chose to forgive my oldest sister who'd abused me emotionally years ago; still don't get along now, but maybe this will be a start. I have forgiven her; now the rest is up to her!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|An excellent thought provoking write!!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Forgiveness takes strength & you got that strength for sure, G...E|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|An excellent, thought provoking write, GEM. The last two lines are particularly poignant. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.