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| Reviewed by vertez |
11/4/2002 |
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I think your poem says exactly what we are all doing...I see people I know,who I thought had what I had,and they seem to have a lot of "something":-) and they are getting by a little faster then me! And I too wonder?
Continue to write...do not let the pen drop! |
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| Reviewed by Afrika Abney |
8/25/2002 |
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A remarkable piece of writing.Very realistic.Look forward to seeing more of your poetry.
Afrika M.A.Abney |
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| Reviewed by Marc |
5/7/2002 |
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| Thanks for writing about the working class existential angst of getting by, looking for a job sometimes, trying to reach for something better and meaningful in one's life, and making do by and by. |
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| Reviewed by fern |
9/8/2001 |
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| WOW! That was a page right out of my thoughts. |
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| Reviewed by rae |
9/4/2001 |
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Lovel,
I like the poem. |
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| Reviewed by rae |
9/4/2001 |
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Lovel,
I like the poem. |
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