Let's Color Awhile
by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary
Sunday, April 12, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Get your crayons.
Let's Color Awhile
Purity I'd color white, and
peace I'd color green.
Eternity would have a golden hue
if it could e'er be seen.
Happiness could never be blue,
but a warmer shade, instead;
but when it's time to color forgiveness,
it must be colored red.
Forgiveness ran down Jesus' brow
from 'neath His thorny crown, and
from His heart of only love,
forgiveness trickled down.
The hands that in compassion had
healed the blind and lame
found nails driven through their flesh, and
the ankles just the same.
But forgiveness and compassion still
filled the voice that cried:
"O Father, please forgive them,"
when He was crucified.
Forgive the hands that laid the stripes, and
drove the nails, sore.
Forgive the ones who spat on me, and
laughed, and cursed, and swore.
Forgiveness ran down red that day,
'tis a miracle, you know,
that it took my crimson sins away, and
turned them white as snow.
Now the golden hue of eternity
illuminates ahead, and
I'll walk in white, all because
forgiveness ran down red.
A picture, now, we have to color,
of our blessed Savior's love:
a model from the Father's Son,
directly from above.
We cannot color purity,
nor peace, nor time ahead --
till we color his forgiveness,
which must be colored red.
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|Reviewed by Helena Harper
|Beautiful sentiments, Dallas, exquisitely worded. A wonderful flow and rhythm to this. I'm reminded of your poem about the colours of the soul, as I read this. A true masterpiece, my friend. Very well done!|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Everything about this is beautiful...the verse, the message and the rhyme.|
|Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
|Dallas, this is very powerful and faith filled poem. Wonderful!!By the way if you have time I invite you to stop by and read one of my poems. I think we have some things in common.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is one of the most inspired and beautifully written Easter poems I have read! Thank you for sharing! Happy Easter!
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|This is an incredible rhyming poem - hard to imagine anyone could think of it! It must be inspired, but credit goes to the poet's effort too. The theme of "the colors of virtue" is just an awesome, irresistible one and that last line tells it all. One special & different kind of Easter poem. Thank you...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You provide substance for reflection via your verses here, Dallas. Thank you. Welcome to AD. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello
|Awesome write here! Such beautiful flow of rhyme and verse, and a message deeply inspiring, full of grace and merciful forgiveness.