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by Laura C Elomaa
Wednesday, April 22, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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More stuff from the break-up days

If I held your hand

Could I make you understand

If I told you lies

Would it be any different

Now that you've said the truth

Was I ever good enough?

Did I ever care enough?

Why wasn't I enough...


Inside my mind

I'm retelling your stories

And I missed the sings

And I am so sorry

For inside my head

was a high to good

But I lost the thread

And am so sorry,

I wasn't true enough for you.


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Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Excellent poem.Take care

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