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Balloon
by Eileen Clemens Granfors
Sunday, April 26, 2009
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Balloon

I bought a clear balloon,

And into it I blew,

Every foul thought, moment of bitterness, anger,

Pain, heartache, doubt, resentment, fear.

The clear balloon turned black and the skin was tight.

It burst.

I felt free.

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Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	4/27/2009

I wrote one similar to this several years ago, "I Wish", when I was frustrated with my boss ... it's always good to release. :) Well done, Eileen, nice reading you again! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.




Reviewed by jude forese	4/26/2009

nice ... quite unique ...




Reviewed by Sophia Ann Montoya	4/26/2009

Excellent visual !!




Reviewed by Felix Perry	4/26/2009

I like it and love the idea that the mind could do this so easily, when my daughter got married she wrote her maiden name on a white helium balloon and holding my hand she let it go into the night to symbolize her becoming the wife to her husband although she assured me I would always be her star. Fee




Reviewed by Linda Settles	4/26/2009

Breathe it out!!! I think it might help at least. But I don't know if it turns black. You may a tinge of multiple other hues mixed into the darkness. The trick is to keep that powerful balloon from floating away with you! :-

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