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A time travel accident that originated in the nearer future triggered the Big Bang long ago. It had an extreme impact in the past in the Garden of Eden and the Great Ech..  
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A narrow view
by Will Bates
Wednesday, April 29, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I have some narrow views. I am young enough, dumb enough, humbled enough to know this. I am growing up.


 

 

It has been done before
fears to hands
friends to fans
hand to mouth
and nothing else

feet on water
grins and shouts
windows to windows
north to south

 

(c)2009 will bates



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Reviewed by Michelle Mead
The best part about knowing you have a narrow view is that means it has already widened- you write some good stuff :)
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Will,
Strong, in-focus, precise images and the picture adds an appropriate dimension. And by the way, welcome to the club...at my relatively advanced age I, too, am growing up.
John
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
As long as you leave room for growth, otherwise one grows stale ....

Be always safe,
Karen
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