A narrow view
by Will Bates
Wednesday, April 29, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I have some narrow views. I am young enough, dumb enough, humbled enough to know this. I am growing up. |
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It has been done before
fears to hands
friends to fans
hand to mouth
and nothing else
feet on water
grins and shouts
windows to windows
north to south
(c)2009 will bates
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
6/27/2009 |
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| The best part about knowing you have a narrow view is that means it has already widened- you write some good stuff :) |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/29/2009 |
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Will,
Strong, in-focus, precise images and the picture adds an appropriate dimension. And by the way, welcome to the club...at my relatively advanced age I, too, am growing up.
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/29/2009 |
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As long as you leave room for growth, otherwise one grows stale ....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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